brain puke

[torpe]

why are boys and girls so far away and built of dreams...i love when people paint a picture, i hate it when they do. men tasked to sell a dream seldom do otherwise. feel like i’ve had a crush on every inch of girl in my world in a starry eyed gaze way. i always wanna kiss everybody. deer in the headlights about whatever is to come but isn’t that what makes it fun? i have a real staring problem but only because everyone grows beautiful to me

[NeuronerdDoaty]

How lovely and charming. What a wonderful and artistic heart and soul you have.

Doaty💛

[2resistant in reply to NeuronerdDoaty]

??? did you actually read the above um... message?

[NeuronerdDoaty in reply to 2resistant]

Yes I did. I take it as a person who views from the outside and people are beautiful. They become too real when they get close and aren’t so beautiful anymore. Advertisements lie. The artist makes it pretty but it’s a lie. This person sees what can be so beautiful but it’s not real. I like the way it was written.

This is how I take it from my point of view.

[torpe in reply to 2resistant]

not understanding or attempting to and making a comment like this doesn’t look nice on anyone. please refrain from doing so in the future

[2resistant in reply to torpe]

You clearly didn't read the 1st post very clearly. I never even hinted on how creepy it sounds.

[torpe in reply to 2resistant]

please refrain from replying to any more of my posts or even further on this one. if it sounds creepy or confusing then why waste your time on it? move along

[torpe in reply to NeuronerdDoaty]

oh thank you for thinking so i really appreciate that 💖

[Starrlight]

I agree it’s wonderful Neuronerd. It’s full of magic your words are, Torpe.

[torpe in reply to Starrlight]

thank you for thinking so and taking the time to try to understand that means the most always 💖

[NeuronerdDoaty in reply to torpe]

If I was wrong in any way I’m sorry. I found it beautiful and it touched me. I feel your artistic soul in this. I’m sorry if I’m wrong.

[torpe in reply to NeuronerdDoaty]

omg no pls don’t apologize! it’s kind of a whatever strikes you kind of thing so whatever you’re feeling will be true to you! left up to interpretation! thank you very much for appreciating

[NeuronerdDoaty]

Torpe may I take artistic liberty with this? I feel you really have something here. I’ll delete if you don’t like it.

People Gazing

Why are people so far away?

Why are they built from my dreams?

Those that sell dreams stumble in reality.

I watch others starry-eyed. I’d like to kiss the perfect dream.

Ah, the deer in the headlights.

The thought makes me laugh.

While I watch from a distance;

Everyone becomes beautiful to me.

———

I see a young man in a park just minding his own business. This is truth. Honestly please let me know if you’d like me to delete my interpretation of your thoughts. I think it’s lovely. It has stayed with me all day. Lovely poetry.

Thank you for sharing.

[torpe in reply to NeuronerdDoaty]

no it’s ok!!!! please don’t feel the need to delete what you think i appreciate your thoughts and your mind the way that it can construct words into so many different things! i really appreciate that thank you for even doing so and i really like your point of view! that was so beautiful to me....💖

[NeuronerdDoaty in reply to torpe]

I’m glad. You’re cool. 👍

[torpe in reply to NeuronerdDoaty]

awww thank you so much! you’re cooler 😎