My Poem... After such a long time

[disturbedbysociety]

It gets dark

As I switch off the lights

And not just the room

But me too, from inside

I feel the empty sphere within me

That holds all my emotions

But I lack love potions

At times I wanna feel the breeze outside

Hoping it would take with it the pain in me

Hoping that it would bring some pain similar to mine

By which I would feel less lonely from inside

Because it gets dark

As I switch off the lights

And not just the room

But me too, from inside

[DMM218]

That's really lovely and poignant. X

[disturbedbysociety in reply to DMM218]

Thank you

[DMM218 in reply to disturbedbysociety]

I hope there is more to come, did writing help at all?

[DMM218 in reply to DMM218]

Btw your light too bright to be switched off - maybe just dimmed for a time.

[disturbedbysociety in reply to DMM218]

I hope your words are true

[disturbedbysociety in reply to DMM218]

Yeah.. also I told my mom today to stop asking me to stay at home to avoid creeps, and that she should help me become bold and not a meek

[DMM218 in reply to disturbedbysociety]

I love that - get your mum out with you - get some chat going - a soft slow attempt to change her mind?

[DMM218 in reply to disturbedbysociety]

Meekness never changed the world only the bold.

[disturbedbysociety in reply to DMM218]

I was told till I met that creep... Now I feel like a dork

[disturbedbysociety in reply to disturbedbysociety]

*bold

[disturbedbysociety in reply to disturbedbysociety]

What's the time by your watch??

[DMM218 in reply to disturbedbysociety]

A bold dork - that's a really apt description for me! I like it.

[disturbedbysociety in reply to DMM218]

Right now I am a meek one, but I wanna be the bold one

[StellaLuna]

Amazingly beautiful! Thank you for writing and posting.