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....My world begins and ends with you, fueled by a fiery love that burns so true....You are the sun that warms my day, and the brightest star that lights my way....My world is dark when I'm all alone, waiting to hear your voice on the phone....I count the minutes and the seconds too, until the moment that I hear from you....I picture you in all the steps I take, your words are there in every choice I make....I will give you everything that's mine, so we both can share a whole lifetime....You are the first, girl, you'll be the last, just hold me tight and forget the past....I thank God the day I made the call and asked if you would always be my all.... [Sometimes, words just have to be said. Ever felt this way? These words needed to be said. As usual, psycho analyze away my friends....]

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Ooooh, sounds like someone is in love!!!!! 😍😍😍😍

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You think, my very good friend? Didn't hide it too well, did I?

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Haha! I think it’s safe to say your secret is out! I’m happy if you’re happy. Love makes the world go round. 💖💖💖💖✨✨✨✨

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Oooooooo JEG is in loooove!!

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JEG325 in reply toMariaLove123

Is it that clear?

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Hey when you’re in love, you should shout it from the mountain tops!! Love is the BEST! And you deserve it. And I’m sure she’s amazing!

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JEG325 in reply toMariaLove123

Well, you're amazing and you're right, she is awesome!

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NCAQuilter

Anyone we know! Beautiful sentiments.

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JEG325 in reply toNCAQuilter

The situation finally demanded it. How was it a poem?

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(as a poem)

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I liked the rhythm and the cadence. As well as the progression of the feelings. Very good!

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Nan, are we gonna have a meeting tonight?

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I have my quilting guild meeting tonight, and will be leaving in about 10 minutes. I'm treasurer, and have to give my year end report. Can we pm tomorrow about 7 PM your time?

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Yes, we can. Enjoy your meeting!

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Good night, and, most importantly, sleep well!

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Thank you!

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JEG325 in reply toNCAQuilter

Thanks for the kind words, my excellent friend!

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🤘🙂🍀⛅️🌤☀️

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Thanks, dude. I guess I didn't fool you either, huh?

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Sillysausage234 in reply toJEG325

Don’t tell d.m any secrets 😉best wishes

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Dude, she already know...Uh, oh....

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JEG325 in reply toSillysausage234

Just teasing, my good friend, D.M.!

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I just now seen this! Hehehe! I’m so good at guessing! Xoxoxo

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You were awesome!

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I just knew you seemed to really like a certain someone! 😉

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Your bestie is beside herself wanting to know all the details....Pure torture for her....😎

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Mistykitten

There is nothing better than a poem or a writing about the love you feel for someone. You have talent. I think your poem is beautiful. Keep writing, and please... keep sharing. I loved it! (and good luck with the loved one!)

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Agreed. You might see some more. My lady friend and I are working together on several poems. She is a good writer too! Thank you for the sweet comments!

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Iloveart7

I love it!

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JEG325 in reply toIloveart7

Thank you! I take it, I didn't fool you either....

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Eowyn7

Awwww this is so cute! I remember feeling like this, it was like 12 years ago now for us... but that's ok, we're still together haha. Enjoy the honey moon phase!

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Thank you for that. You got a smile out of me. Glad your still together. Hope we are still together 12 years from now.

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Eowyn7 in reply toJEG325

I hope so too! Keep all your love notes... or emails, or whatever medium you use haha. They can be quite nice to look back at years later.

Ooooooooooh lurrrrve is in the air ♥️♥️♥️💕💕💕🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 hehe. Lovely!

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Thanks for your reply. It's nearly as cute as my girl. Always nice to hear from you, my good friend.

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How are you?

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Just fine, my friend. My lady friend and I just finished a poem about a cat. It's cuter than heck. (Like her). It is our favorite activity together. Life is happy right now. You?

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That’s cute. I’m much better! Been celebrating hubbys bday yesterday which was lovely x

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Awesome!

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Marielle1

Your desire to have someone in your life very strong so is mine I hope our wish is fulfilled 😇❤️

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JEG325 in reply toMarielle1

Indeed. I also hope both our wishes are granted. Thanks for the kind words.

Wow that is beautiful & for 100% it screams I'm in love! Thank you my friend. Make it shine today. Love, peace, light, joy & hugs for you!

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You make it shine anytime I talk to you!

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Oh you are such a kind man, ya know those are hard to find, haha! Love, peace, light, joy & hugs!

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That's what S says too. But, there are plenty of good women left in the world, like you and her!

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Thank you! I love you sooo!!!

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Me more! To infinity! Hah! I win on this site! (Uh, don't tell S, I'm still up.

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Haha no you don't..I do!!! Go to SLEEP! XXX

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You cheat, threatening to tell S like that....Going now, my very good friend!

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No I don't cheat silly you! I speak the truth, haha! Go to Sleep...NOW! XXX

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Yes, ma'am......

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Thank you! Sweet Dreams my friend! Love, peace, light, joy & hugs for you!

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BonnieSue in reply toJEG325

S KNOWS...

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Uh, oh......

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HI SUE!!!! I haven’t ever talked to you before, but I wanted to say hello! 🤗💖✨

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Hi!!! I hope you have a great weekend! We can talk sometime, ok?

Is it a girl from your past ? Does she know? Is she married? A nice poem

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It's a girl from my present and we're together!

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That's great!

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Yay for me! I'm happy!

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