I write a song for my depression. I felt like sharing. It's my first time.

[_Mr_Nobody_]

Title:

Before you kill me

Verse 1

Told me I'm broken

heard it for too long

So many times spoken

Forgot that you are wrong

Each scar a token

Your words they were so strong

Chorus

I wish that I could kill you!

(I know you want to kill me!)

I so badly want to kill you!

(Before you get to kill me!)

I wish that I could kill you!

(Please let me kill you!)

I so badly want to kill you!

( I want to watch you die!)

Verse 2

F**CK you, you broke me

The darkness it choked me

Dissolve my identity

Convinced me that you are me

Dead hope, I'm empty

No life, not meant to be

Chorus

I wish that I could kill you!

(I know you want to kill me!)

I so badly want to kill you!

(Before you get to kill me!)

I wish that I could kill you!

(Please let me kill you!)

I so badly want to kill you!

(Before you watch me die!)

Verse 3

Why are you here? (I hate you!)

Feed on my fears! (You hate me!)

Why are you near? (I hate you!)

bathed in my tears! (You hate me!)

Chorus

I wish that I could kill you!

(I know you want to kill me!)

I so badly want to kill you!

(Please just let me kill you!)

I wish that I could kill you!

(I want to watch you die)

I so badly want to kill you!

( You want to watch me die!)

[ElephantsHear]

as long as it’s just a song- it sounds excellent. Reminds me of Hansen, “I’m a loser baby, so why don’t you kill me”. If you’ve never heard it it’s a cool song.

[_Mr_Nobody_ in reply to ElephantsHear]

Thanks. I'll check it out, I like getting recommendations from people ☺️.

Glad you like it. I'm a bit insecure about my writing ability. Yeah it's just a song about wanting to be able to kill my depression because at that time I felt that it's trying to kill me

[ElephantsHear in reply to _Mr_Nobody_]

wow, you’re talented. Maybe you should change the title to “Before you kill me (depression)”. I thought maybe you were writing about your mom or dad. I like the song even more now. Good luck on your musical career!

[_Mr_Nobody_ in reply to ElephantsHear]

Thanks, it feels strange when people said I'm talented because I feel like I'm just okay at the things I do. But I do appreciate the compliment though thanks.

I'm not interested in a musical career though, I just write as an outlet, I draw and create digital art too. Nothing professionally.

I'm genuinely happy you like what I wrote

[_Mr_Nobody_ in reply to ElephantsHear]

Thanks, it feels strange when people said I'm talented because I feel like I'm just okay at the things I do. But I do appreciate the compliment though thanks.

I'm not interested in a musical career though, I just write as an outlet, I draw and create digital art too. Nothing professionally.

I'm genuinely happy you like what I wrote