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The Day After (1st poem )

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The plans have all been done

The verses were read through

Everyone had a say of exactly

What they thought of you

The cars and the people

All that came that day

To show the love they had for you

In a very special way

Now it is all over and everyone

has gone back home

Im stuck here in my loneliness

Sad and crying and all alone

They say that time is a healer

I hope what they say is true

Because right at this minute dell

I can't stand doing this without you

How strong and great I'm doing

That's all I seem to hear

They just can't seem to see

All the pain and hurt in here

I just go on day by day by day

And listen quietly at all they have to say

And then I smile so sweetly and thoughts are in my head

Didn't you really listen to what ive just said

So off to bed early

That's what I seem to do

But we know the real reason is

So I can dream of you

We are back in each others arms

As that's what we loved to do

Just a shame I have to wake up

And its always without you xx

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Robbie138

Hidden that is so beautiful, I'm sorry for your loss.

Take care xx

in reply to Robbie138

Thank you that was my 1st poem like write it cause no1 seemed to be listening to me how much I was hurting people just think you are a strong woman you will deal well with death xx

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Robbie138 in reply to

I think it's expected of us to just accept it,but not everyone is the same. It tears you apart. Xx

in reply to Robbie138

Yes and they think they know what it is like being me as they have lost someone but sorry 4 people in 5 mths 1 was my mum and then my partner of 25 yrs xx

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Annunnaki

That's beautifully written and poignant sweetie. I could identify. May I please share elsewhere. I'll give you credit obviously. 💗

Blessings.

in reply to Annunnaki

Yes hun I don't mind just remember it has Dells name in the poem xx

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Annunnaki in reply to

Does that means "in memory of Dell's" please?

in reply to Annunnaki

No title is

The day after....

Just because I wrote it about dells I wrote his name in the poem xx

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Annunnaki in reply to

Ok. Ta. <3

in reply to Annunnaki

You like that 1 got a few more as well x

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Annunnaki in reply to

Yes please. Anytime you feel ready to post or pm them to me. Thanks a lot. <3

in reply to Annunnaki

It has helped me sometimes to write them as they come from my heart as I write and however I am at that time xx

in reply to Annunnaki

I am champane without the G lol xx

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Annunnaki in reply to

Sorry, thanks for letting me know. <3

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Rick1on1

Nice poem Champane!

It's such a great way to release some emotion.

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Smartbob1

That is beautiful Champane, your poetry will help you heal xxxxxx

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