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The Fall

I descend into, I don’t know where.

A world filled with, only despair,

Where time has now forever ceased,

Seconds, minutes, hours are beast.

I descend into, I don’t know where,

A place so dark I do not dare,

To open my eyes, see the sight,

Ceaseless night, endless blight.

I descend into, I don’t know where,

A place of rot, my skin I tear,

Cut and scrape, cause eyes to weep

All to see if red does seep.

I descend into, I don’t know where,

Time is paused, I sit and stare,

Contemplate, a life now past

Detest the choices that were cast.

I descend into, I don’t know where,

A world enveloped with warfare,

Thoughts, beliefs conflict in mind,

Future unclear, reality blind.

I descend into, I don’t know where,

A place from which I do not care,

My only wish, I could go back,

To fix where life began to crack.

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Vanessa707

Did you write this yourself? It’s really good

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GiGismiles in reply toVanessa707

Hi Vanessa, I found some of it and began to work with it. I changed it a few times. I was hoping it wasnt too dark to post.

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Vanessa707 in reply toGiGismiles

I really really like it!

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Yesterdayhurts

Great writing, more would be awesome. Please share more. Thanks all of us.

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Starrlight

The last part really spoke to me. I often think of times that caused more and more steps into a life that showed it’s cracks and lead to despair but it’s like I couldn’t see it, nor myself, at the time, found evasion to be a friend, I started doing things to distract and escape from the true problems and I didn’t talk about it to anyone, all the hurt. I wish I could go back and redo some things.

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GiGismiles in reply toStarrlight

We are awakening. It is painful to become aware sometimes. Not being alone in life is important, i love being alone but not lonely. We must rise up, gain power and knowledge to overcome the depths of insanity society has taken upon us. We can overcome this hell hole and make it better for future life. Only corrupt men could have done this horrible abomination to this planet and to humanity. We must overcome and resist. Stand up stand up, use your voice, be heard. Find solace in your strength, it's in there, use it for your own power 😍

If life were there to never crack,

Would we give here?

Would we give back?

Or look down onto those in pain.

With deep despair and deep disdain.

And judge them from our faked grin.

Maybe it’s a gift we have within?

To feel the depths others do not.

The place of dark...the place of rot.

I like this little thing we did..

We share a thing we cannot rid...

❤️💪👋🤙🙏🙏

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Nice 💓 thank you

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