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Standing Outside Of Time (A poem by Bonnie Sue & JEG325)

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Hello, ADAA site members. Many of you have been asking why I haven't been posting poems recently. I guess one reason is that Sue & I have been spending so much time with each other. Nothing wrong there. But, I have a backlog of poems that I have written and I will start posting them again 2 per week or so....As usual any and all feedback is appreciated. Sue & I love you all!

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Hi JEG I don't usually bother reading poems but I think this one was very good and I was riveted. Did you and Sue really write it? it definitely struck a chord with me. :) x

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Yes, we did. I felt it was one of the best we've ever written. We theorized the premis would make a good short story. Glad you liked it.

I couldn't read that, it's dark and for some reason I can't enlarge my screen

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My apologies. It's the only way I could get this site to maintain the format I wrote the poem in. Again, I aplologize.

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Can you pm it please?

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Sue is gonna help me with that. I will read it to her and she will arrange it in poem format with larger print so you can read it. But, it might not be tonight. Okay? I'm a novice when it comes to getting stuff to format properly on this site. Is that solution okay? You are already logged in as a member of our main writing group. Did you also want to be in a general chat site?

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Yes please to the general chat site. I was just wondering about the times of your writers group, are they British times?

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No. Amrican EST. I used to live in Ohio, Now, I'm in Florida. Okay, I am putting you on the 'Circle Of Friends' chat site. You will be the 10th and final person in that group. Okay?

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You are in. That chat site just went quiet but, is pretty active all day long in general. Hope you enjoy it.

I can read that now thanks. Maybe it's because I have a lamp on. It's beautiful but sad. Thanks

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Glad you liked it.

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