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Torn

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Two hearts torn apart by

the wedge of reason.

Cursed by the pride of

our changing minds.

No longer blinded by infatuation.

Desperation would rather be blind.

(That doesn't make it right)

But you believe the older folk

and who am I to pilfer?

Sure, your soul still rages -

Afflicted by your -isms.

While my ego says that I can save you,

Survival tells me to mind my own.

Depression tells me your better off

And holds me accountable

for your being alone.

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JEG325

Justsomedude, you write some awesome stuff. Would you like to join my writing group? You would be the 9th and last member. We would provide you with a small family of friends to talk to when you're down and we're working towards publishing the best of our multi creative arts works. Our forum is open 24/7 to our members and may be used anytime someones is on it. I think you're pretty good. Give it some thought okay? My circle of friends would especially like your material. Otherwise, keep up the good work!

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That'd be great. How do I do that?

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And thanks.

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Sorry, I was off eating, you just joined. Metings are M-W-F, 7 to 9pm, EST. Our chat line is open 24/7 whenever someone is on it. I add your avatar to the others and presto! You/re one of us!

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Sounds creepy, lol. Just kidding. I just want to share some poetry.

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We share poetry all the time. We also edit & rewrite upon request. All original material stays with it's writer. Do you skype?

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You can now respond on the chat line. I am there.

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We're ready when you are, new member of the Creative Expressions Group.

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Welcome aboard, my friend. On the pm chat line we use our real names and we are a pretty tight nit group. I lead & my lady friend BonnieSue, is my 2IC. I am adding you now!

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I'll be around this evening, can't wait to meet you!

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CazO46

Beautifully heart felt 💜

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Thank you.

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Helpu

Sad but nicely done.

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Thanks.

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Marielle1

This could have been written for me

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Marielle1 in reply toMarielle1

😢

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I'm sorry.

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