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THE LIGHT

I CAN SEE RAY OF LIGHT COMING FROM A

DARKEST CORNER OF A ROOM

I AM REACHING TOWARDS THE CORNER

TO SEE FROM WHERE THE LIGHT IS COMING

BUT IT FEELS LIKE IT WILL TAKE

A MILLION YEARS TO REACH THE CORNER

I AM EAGER TO REACH THE CORNER AS SOON AS POSSIBLE

AS I WANT TO ESCAPE THE DARKNESS

I FEEL IT TOOK ME A LONG TIME TO REALIZE

TO COME OUT OF THE DARKNESS AND TO OVERCOME MY DESPAIR

MY LIFE HAS NOT BEEN EASY, HAPPY OR WITH JOY

I HAD MANY UPS AND DOWNS WHICH I FACED SUCCESSFULLY

BUT THIS TIME I FAILED TREMENDOUSLY

I SHUT EVERYONE

I SHUT MYSELF

AND I SAT IN A DARKEST CORNER OF THE ROOM

IN THAT THERE WAS NOTHING ELSE EXCEPT DARKNESS

BUT WHEN I SAW THE LIGHT

MY HEART POUNCED AND ONCE AGAIN

THERE WAS A HOPE TO OVERCOME DARKNESS

AND START TO LIVE A NEW LIFE IN WHICH THERE WILL BE LOTS OR COLORS

HOPE , LOVE AND LIGHTS

WHEN I THOUGHT ABOUT THIS

I SAW THE LIGHT COMING WITHIN ME

IT WAS JUST THAT I HAD TO REALIZE

THAT WE SHOULD MOVE ON

AND WE SHOULD NOT LET OURSELVES DOWN

AND IF WE REALIZE THIS

WE NO LONGER NEED TO FIND THE RAY OF LIGHT

THE LIGHT WILL COME WITHIN YOU

AND FEEL YOUR LIFE WITH HAPPINESS

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fauxartist

that is very enspiring....good work AmIHappy....I liked it....

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AmIHappy in reply tofauxartist

thank you very much!!

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Stilltrying_

Good job :) It explains your situation and your feelings very well. x

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AmIHappy in reply toStilltrying_

thnxs for reading my poem!

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-Poetic2

Read your poems. I think you are very clear and I am glad you are able to see yourself and get it on paper! From one poet to another.

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AmIHappy in reply to-Poetic2

hi! thank you very much for reading my poem! and when u will post some of ur writings??

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