Flamingos

[just_here]

Tape dancing flamingos fly across the sky

one stays

Wings flapping but nothing happened

Stuck across the Havana sun

Hippos amarg from the water as if nothing happens

Red orange blue pink red

This flamingo will never see the sky like all of her lovely sister have

Feathers picked from the skin as if poachers have attack

But thought ingares were done by them self

Flamingo will never see the top of the trees as her lovely brothers have

So she plays in the water pertaining she is fine with that

Flamingo will never dance as graceful as her friends

She will stay until the sunrise ends

[fauxartist]

thank you for your lovely poem....

[mrmonk]

Vivid, imaginative writing -- keep at it!