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I WISH !

This poem was one I found a while ago. which I thought would be a good one to open poets corner. :)

Quitting Smoking

I feel a little desperate

A smoke is what I seek

It's been three days

I'm starting to feel weak

I'm trying to kick the habit

But I'm not doing too well

As I frantically search the house

That's becoming my own hell

Just one drag is all I ask

That will help me through

If I don't find a cigarette

I don't know what I'll do

I want to quit smoking

I know that I could

But the way I'm feeling

I don't know if I should

Starting was so easy

But stopping is such a task

I only hope I can hold out

So my resistance will last

I'd love nothing better

Then to be cigarette free

I also know the benefits

All the good it would do for me

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Aup Jillygirl, this is just flippin great gal, just loooooooooove it :) :)

I'm sorry but I cant remember reading this one before !! must be my 1 brain cell playing up eh :o :D :D

Hey, you had a good Caturday gal ? :)

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Hey Jillygirl, do you remember this poem that you wrote, erm a while ago eh :D :D

Dont give Up

Posted by jillygirl

1 May 2012

Hello to all you ex smoking critters,

Welcome aboard the club for quitters,

Dont get in a flap when you get a craving,

Its no good ranting and raving,

Dont let your body tell you your in need of a fag,

Listen to your brain saying its evil that drag,

Take a deep breath and think you have peace in your mind,

Make yourself a cuppa, sit down and unwind,

Go into this site at least once a day,

Take in the advice from our friend Emjay.

If you get bored, and you get the time,

Send us all a blog to go with this rhyme.

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jillygirlAdministratorQueen Bee

Hey Pete , Guess what been shopping again :P

How are you ?

I1d forgotten about that rhyme. cheers.

Better get my poets brain cell on.

I will ask everyone how poetic they are tomorrow.

So start thinking. :) :) xx

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monkyAdministratorCake sniffer outer in reply tojillygirl

Hi Jillygirl, sooooo, you been food shopping or you bought another 20 tops then :o :D :D

As for your poem, I saved all of em, even Emjays and mine :D :D xx

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jillygirlAdministratorQueen Bee in reply tomonky

Food this morning and 2 tops and 1 pair of flip flops this aft. :)

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monkyAdministratorCake sniffer outer in reply tojillygirl

Flippin flip flops :o they just keep flippin flippin off my flippin feet when I put flippin flip flops on they flippin dooooo, I tell ya Jillygirl :o :D

Oy, what about poor hubby then, whats he had :o

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jillygirlAdministratorQueen Bee in reply tomonky

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Hubby got shirt and jumpers so cant complain. :P

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jillygirlAdministratorQueen Bee

LOTS OF NEW MEMBERS , LOTS OF NEW FACES,

FROM ALL ROUND THE WORLD , ALL DIFFERENT PLACES,

WE ALL TRY TO STOP SMOKING WITHOUT ANY CATCHES

USING E CIGS ,GUM OR NICOTINE PATCHES

THE OUTCOME IS ALL THAT MATTERS

SO COME AND JOIN IN WE ARE ALL MAD AS HATTERS.

THE GOOD THING IS YOUR NOT ON YOUR OWN

MONKY PETE , ANDI ,AND EMJAY TOO

ARE ALWAYS HERE WAITING FOR YOU

CHRISSIE AND SIN FRESHER AND JILLY

KAPRIN AND BETTS WE ALL ACT QUITE SILLY

THERS JAMES, AND PINKIE AND BRIARWOOD TOO

THAT IS JUST TO NAME BUT A FEW

SO PLEASE COME AND JOIN US AND LAUGH A BIT MORE

NOW JUST WATCH US ALL KICK OLD NIC OUT OF THE DOOR.

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ChrissieG in reply tojillygirl

Oh my gosh, that is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! Wow I'm so impressed, well done Jilly - I can't do anything like that :) :) :) xx

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jillygirlAdministratorQueen Bee in reply toChrissieG

Give it a go. you can do it. :D

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Fresher8 MONTH WINNER in reply tojillygirl

Aahh that's so brilliant Jilly xx

monky profile image
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Just looooooove it Jillygirl :) :)

All copied and put into my poems folder gal :)

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jillygirlAdministratorQueen Bee in reply tomonky

That folder must be getting bigger.

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jillygirlAdministratorQueen Bee

A CHILDS POINT OF VIEW.

Why do people smoke tobacco, is it good for you?,

Cowboys have tobacco that they sit and chew,

They look so very grown up, sending smoke into the air.

It doesnt really smell nice, but they dont seem to care.

I wonder why they shout at me when I say can I try,

No way! can you smoke, it will make you die.

Grown ups are odd, as they say we are only looking after you.

So WHY do they smoke? IS it good for you?

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Fresher8 MONTH WINNER

So sad but very true x

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