I WISH !
This poem was one I found a while ago. which I thought would be a good one to open poets corner.
Quitting Smoking
I feel a little desperate
A smoke is what I seek
It's been three days
I'm starting to feel weak
I'm trying to kick the habit
But I'm not doing too well
As I frantically search the house
That's becoming my own hell
Just one drag is all I ask
That will help me through
If I don't find a cigarette
I don't know what I'll do
I want to quit smoking
I know that I could
But the way I'm feeling
I don't know if I should
Starting was so easy
But stopping is such a task
I only hope I can hold out
So my resistance will last
I'd love nothing better
Then to be cigarette free
I also know the benefits
All the good it would do for me
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monky Administrator Cake sniffer outer 11 years ago Aup Jillygirl, this is just flippin great gal, just loooooooooove it
I'm sorry but I cant remember reading this one before !! must be my 1 brain cell playing up eh
Hey, you had a good Caturday gal ?
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monky Administrator Cake sniffer outer 11 years ago Hey Jillygirl, do you remember this poem that you wrote, erm a while ago eh
Dont give Up
Posted by jillygirl
1 May 2012
Hello to all you ex smoking critters,
Welcome aboard the club for quitters,
Dont get in a flap when you get a craving,
Its no good ranting and raving,
Dont let your body tell you your in need of a fag,
Listen to your brain saying its evil that drag,
Take a deep breath and think you have peace in your mind,
Make yourself a cuppa, sit down and unwind,
Go into this site at least once a day,
Take in the advice from our friend Emjay.
If you get bored, and you get the time,
Send us all a blog to go with this rhyme.
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Hey Pete , Guess what been shopping again
How are you ?
I1d forgotten about that rhyme. cheers.
Better get my poets brain cell on.
I will ask everyone how poetic they are tomorrow.
So start thinking. xx
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monky Administrator Cake sniffer outer • in reply tojillygirl 11 years ago Hi Jillygirl, sooooo, you been food shopping or you bought another 20 tops then
As for your poem, I saved all of em, even Emjays and mine xx
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Food this morning and 2 tops and 1 pair of flip flops this aft.
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monky Administrator Cake sniffer outer • in reply tojillygirl 11 years ago Flippin flip flops they just keep flippin flippin off my flippin feet when I put flippin flip flops on they flippin dooooo, I tell ya Jillygirl
Oy, what about poor hubby then, whats he had
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LOTS OF NEW MEMBERS , LOTS OF NEW FACES,
FROM ALL ROUND THE WORLD , ALL DIFFERENT PLACES,
WE ALL TRY TO STOP SMOKING WITHOUT ANY CATCHES
USING E CIGS ,GUM OR NICOTINE PATCHES
THE OUTCOME IS ALL THAT MATTERS
SO COME AND JOIN IN WE ARE ALL MAD AS HATTERS.
THE GOOD THING IS YOUR NOT ON YOUR OWN
MONKY PETE , ANDI ,AND EMJAY TOO
ARE ALWAYS HERE WAITING FOR YOU
CHRISSIE AND SIN FRESHER AND JILLY
KAPRIN AND BETTS WE ALL ACT QUITE SILLY
THERS JAMES, AND PINKIE AND BRIARWOOD TOO
THAT IS JUST TO NAME BUT A FEW
SO PLEASE COME AND JOIN US AND LAUGH A BIT MORE
NOW JUST WATCH US ALL KICK OLD NIC OUT OF THE DOOR.
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Oh my gosh, that is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! Wow I'm so impressed, well done Jilly - I can't do anything like that xx
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Give it a go. you can do it.
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Aahh that's so brilliant Jilly xx
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monky Administrator Cake sniffer outer 11 years ago Just looooooove it Jillygirl
All copied and put into my poems folder gal
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That folder must be getting bigger.
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A CHILDS POINT OF VIEW.
Why do people smoke tobacco, is it good for you?,
Cowboys have tobacco that they sit and chew,
They look so very grown up, sending smoke into the air.
It doesnt really smell nice, but they dont seem to care.
I wonder why they shout at me when I say can I try,
No way! can you smoke, it will make you die.
Grown ups are odd, as they say we are only looking after you.
So WHY do they smoke? IS it good for you?
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So sad but very true x
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