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Short poem somewhere between acceptance and defeat.

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I look out the window of the prison beyond moat too fields and tree.

I look out through the eye of the mind beyond the symptoms in search of a new me.

I look out and everything has changed, I have less doubt of that.

Words I say, write or are said to me, have so much more meaning and tone.

Somewhere between acceptance and a wise respectfully retreat lies a new home.

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peck

Hidden , Very good!! I really enjoyed your poem thanks for sharing. Have a good day . Peck.🐤

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Thanks Peck, appreciated..I just read your profile .

Firstly I see your from the US so I just feel inclined to say...

Yo Dude..!

Your journey has been long , and just saying that some how makes me feel sad.So that said now.... wow.. Dude your amazing and love to you and your family..Your must have inspired many people in more ways than you know imagine.

This FM stuff gets me deep and meaningful rather sharpish.

I wish you a splendid.. Day ..night ..eve...morning ...what ever time of day this ramble meet you..

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peck in reply to

Lol!!It sounds like you have been wanting to say that for a while.I don't know how you find me amazing but thanks for the compliment . Take care.Peck🐤

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naturalnikki

That was very good. It expresses great emotion and I can completely relate to it. Thank you for sharing.

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Thanks, I was hoping that in some way to connect. As this whole FM stuff has got me over a barrel...so learning what's avaliable to have control as life pass by is becoming a fascinating new generation game or a pile of elephant dung.I think poems are gonna have more to do with me getting my head around all this.

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naturalnikki in reply to

Yes. Writing is an outlet for me as well. It really does help. It is a real mental game, fibro. It's a dirty wh*re, that just sucks the life out of you. :) sorry really needed to get that out. :)

Have you put this on the poem post? It's called expressing yourself. .. something. There are a lot of good stuff on there. You should check it out if you haven't. Sorry can't really remember the name. Hopefully someone else has said it or will.

Keep writing.

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woopcushen

thanx for sharing, i enjoyed that

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Kayleigh_91

Lovely poem, thanks for sharing! 😄

=]

xx

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TheAuthor

Wonderful, thank you so much for sharing :)

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