DARKNESS

[smjtty]

DEEP DARK CIRCLES AROUND MY EYES FROM A OLD INJERY

AS IF I WAS STRUCK BY LIGHTNING AND IN A FIRE OF ASHS

LIKE DIRT ON MY FACE THAT I CAN NOT REMOVE ALSO

LAYS THE SUNKEN EYES OF A LIFELESS AND THE REMAINS

OF SOME ONE WHO HAS DIED THE FADED PHONE CALLS

OF A FRIEND ENDS THEN YOU WANT TO CRAWL BACK INTO

YOUR HOLE HAIR IS A TANGSELED MAS OF IT DOSENT

MATTER ANY WAY

[Goldfish_]

Sounds pretty negative! This will make you feel bad

[Agora1]

Hi smjtty; I guess I don't have to ask how you are. Your poem says it all. Whenever I read one of them, it touches me very deeply. I have seen miracles performed not only with cosmetic surgery but just from a makeover. Your eyes are sunken and lifeless because of how you perceive yourself. That part is coming from within. What if you entertain the idea of someone (a professional makeup artist) giving you a makeover to erase the darkness around your eyes and your face. Have your hair cut and styled and maybe highlighted. The finished product would be an amazing you so that when you looked into the mirror your eyes would suddenly come alive. There is no reason to let life slip away, you have so much to give smjtty. x

[smjtty in reply to Agora1]

THERE IS NOTHING ANY ONE CAN DO 4 THIS

[Agora1 in reply to smjtty]

Oh smjtty xx