Cityman - Your 'Cheery' Xmas post!!! your haven a shabby diirty hole where you can bleed a requiem for a damaged soul " You are VERY good at writing poetry - you should try and get into print; This has to be the best and it's very deep and meaningful.
Love this poem!
I also love the words
"A life experience ebbs and bleeds
Into a web that holds and keeps
Paragraphs of angst and strife
Expand into maelstroms of life" ( had to look up the meaning of maelstrom too!)
I take it the web is the internet web?
Last paragraph extremely powerful too! i fancy myself as a poetry 'critique! lol
To sum up I wouldnt say " Cheerful!! but that is your dark sense of humour I fear!!
You're very kind,but don't encourage me,that was one of my cheerful ones!Have an excellent Crimbo and I raise my glass of fermented-but non-alchoholic sprout wine to you and all,and wish all sunburn and sunkissed glades.xx
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