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I’d take care of you forever

If I knew I could heal your wounds or even be with you and try

If that’s what you wanted

Just for us to be close without me hurting you ever

For you to feel the breeze on your face and be free is my wish

And It’s hard to let you take care of my heart so broken

I don’t wish to be selfish but that’s how it spills out like the ocean we haven’t been to together in ages

I’m tired of being in the type of pain that won’t end because the pain is who I am right now

May no one expect me to be who I am not

But I’d rather be stronger some day soon for you

And you dear I see you and you are the strongest I’ve known so I smile into that calm relief

Weakness spills out of my heart when I try to be there for you child

I would love for us to run wild together through the fields again and have you always know without a doubt how much never ending love I have for you

The smell of honey suckles is ours

The look in your kind compassionate eyes is a dream

As we wipe the tears away

Let’s be free

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Beautiful

Wow! Such a way with words, I wish I was as expressive as you.

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Ddorne

Amen

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XoxoFaith

❤️

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newbie1956

Starr,

O, this reminds me of the Song of Solomon, which reads in part...

“I am but a saffron of the coastal plain, a lily of the valleys. Like a lily among thorns is my beloved among the daughters. Like an apple tree among the trees of the forest, so is my dear one among the sons.

I passionately desire to sit in his shade and his fruit is sweet to my taste. He brought me into the banquet house and his banner over me was love. Refresh me with raisin cakes; Sustain me with apples, For I am lovesick.... It depicts true love like the blazing of fire, the flame of Jah...

Until the day grows breezy and the shadows flee return quickly, O my dear one like the gazelle or the young stag upon the mountains of separation.

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Realizing this writing is all over the place so I think I’ll work on it and though it’s not great the emotions of especially love soothes me.

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