shiny

[torpe]

to the soft forgotten freckles i kissed

begged away and still i want

i myself tied the knot you jumped

i stop feeling, swimming under soft grasp

getting high, passing time

all begged away but still i so want

[mrmonk]

I haven't the words for how good this is -- you are a marvel.

[torpe in reply to mrmonk]

😳 oh my gosh what an honor 😭...a serious thank you from the pit of my heart you are too kind 😭💖 ahh!! thank you!

[Hidden]

Beautiful poem. Thumbs up!

[torpe in reply to Hidden]

thank you so kindly 💖💖💖 i really appreciate it

[Hidden]

Beautiful, beautiful! You are so talented!

[torpe in reply to Hidden]

oh thank you so much for thinking so ❤💖 so very kind 💖