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a poem i wrote

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please be pateint with this patient

try not to get the wrong impression

of an indentation & its called depression.

a feeling that's there when you wake in a morning.

you have no control and there is no warning.

like some was has died and your hurt inside

you just want to cry but don't no why.

but there is no reason and it is not the season.

a sense your so low-& just want it to go.

dreading the cloud you are under may turn into thunder

please world go away if only for a today.

no wish for tomorrow unless your mind i borrow.

an illness you cannot see but for us it's misery.

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Nice poem, well written & heart felt.

x

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cat3

So sad......and sadly so true. :-( xx

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100pipers

POEM

I FIND THIS ALL SO EXCITING

SOMEONE ELSE HAS STARTED WRITING

SOME PEOPLE MAY DISAGREE

BUT THIS HELPS PEOPLE

LIKE YOU AND ME

SO KEEP ON WRITING

AND UNTIL THEN

MORE POWER TO YOUR PEN

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100pipers

POEM

I FIND THIS ALL SO EXCITING

SOMEONE ELSE HAS STARTED WRITING

SOME PEOPLE MAY DISAGREE

BUT THIS HELPS PEOPLE

LIKE YOU AND ME

SO KEEP ON WRITING

AND UNTIL THEN

MORE POWER TO YOUR PEN

zainey-lainey profile image
zainey-lainey

love it.

thank good that we can still write hey.

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CW2002

Music helps sometimes, ocean lab on a good day play loud for best effect!!!

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zainey-lainey

, ocean lab.......off to go you tube it. tar

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SandraEB

Thank you for the beautiful poem. It really moved me. x

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tecky

i hope you don't mind zainey lainey?? i have printed this off and have put it on my fridge for all to read. it say's it all,thanks.

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zainey-lainey

im touched x

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EternallyBlessed

Thank you to the creative talents who've shared their poems (zainey-lainey and 100-pipers),.Zainey-lainey you express the experience of living with depression so completely... You're a great mental health ambassador :)

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iforget

I think it is great that following brain injury some people have found a creative outlet using words..and at the same time it makes me quite sad too because I was a published author prior to my brain injury ...which has left me quite literally lost for words... now I can barely string a coherent sentence together and my 'latest' work remains unfinished and neglected...

Of course on the up-side to that I have developed an alternative creative outlet... not the one I would have chosen for myself but I have something to keep me out of mischief ;)

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ricozoe

Thnku zainy.i read this every am i was crying am wen i read the bit about crying and not knowing why it makes me feel better.

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ricozoe

Thnku zainy.i read this every am i was crying am wen i read the bit about crying and not knowing why it makes me feel better.

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ricozoe

Thnku zainy.i read this every am i was crying am wen i read the bit about crying and not knowing why it makes me feel better.

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