Would you be happy to write a piece for us, we love to read your work and hopefully inspire others to contribute, I'll even try myself, how's that?
Chloe
Would you be happy to write a piece for us, we love to read your work and hopefully inspire others to contribute, I'll even try myself, how's that?
Chloe
I’d known you all my life
Your warmth, your love and care
I thought your illnesses were feigned
but now I understand.
That life can be so cruel for some
while others find such peace
But that is something even now
I still don’t understand.
I wish I’d been more thoughtful
But I was not to know
That life can be so painful
But now I understand.
Chloe
{{{teardrop}}}
That is so powerful Chloe40. It sent tingles right over me. Big big hugs,
Lottie x
Thank you indeed fir sharing such a personal piece with us. Maybe time will tell you more.
up above the clouds and the deep blue sky
there is a place called heaven.
full of angels flying high.
we look beyond them
and then ask why.
you held me first I held you last
but you will never be in the past.
you gave your freedom to watch me grow
forever greatful that you know.
you where my mum my hero my friend
up into heaven my love I send.
when I lost my son you held me when I cried
as you know what its like when your kids had died.
now that dads gone to be with you all
up above the deep blue sky
I will still be crying and asking why.
Oh Kenny kenster1
This is so poignant, so beautiful and such a lovely way to remember your dear Mum. If it were me Kenny. I'd write this out and keep it along with some photos and special things of your dear son, Mum and Dad and keep them in a memory box.
Chloe
She's Gone
Here we go into the abyss
of confusion and take our seats
on the rollercoaster of emotion and
on into the tunnel of darkness
which death brings the living.
-
Bring me light at the end of this
everlasting passage and freedom
from the weight of burden
which hangs heavy on my soul
today and so many yesterdays.
-
Your release should be mine -
for too long I carried your pain,
your bitter tears and twisted lies,
your misery and self hatred
clouding my beautiful skies.
-
Be free at last and leave me
once more alone but now
no drama, no lies or schemes.
Leave me finally; your damaged
child and mother of my dreams.
Hi GoGo_JoJo
Thank you so very much for writing this and posting. I do hope that writing this has brought you a little comfort, Do you write poetry generally?
if not, you may find this to be a healing outlet, I do hope so. We'd love to read your work more often.
Chloe
Thank you. It's something that comes in bursts during both good and bad times. I used to write a lot, both poetry and journaling but now it's more sporadic. I wrote that just before heading over to sort her things out. My stress levels were through the roof so it was an outlet of sorts 👍
You're very talented! we've a regular slot here for you whenever you wish.
Chloe
This was another loss, many, many years ago now...
Consequence of Choice
.
I made a choice, years ago.
It was “simple” he said
one of us had to got to go.
.
A life for a life,
we were never going to be
a family; man & wife.
.
“Keep it if you wish” he said
“to you, I can’t dictate
but please do not be misled.”
.
“If it should come to my place
seeking anything at all
I shall deny it to its’ face.”
.
I take all of the blame,
the choice was mine to make
included, all the shame.
.
I think about you
at least once a year.
It’s something I can’t not do.
.
Baby, what could I do?
I had dreamed so long
of one day holding you.
.
Yet I felt so young,
alone, my dreams dashed,
my ideals seemed far flung.
.
Even now I shed a tear,
I can’t really believe
it has been eighteen year.
.
I’ll never have another.
I couldn’t bear to look
upon your sister, or brother.
.
Baby, I’m sorrier than you know
I never knew you, or you me,
yet I really need to let you go.
Thank you GoGo_JoJo
This is so poignant, I cannot imagine how you felt {{{hugs}}}
Chloe
From Hidden
I want to share my journey with grief. I share it with you as I was writing, starting as a poem and then morphing into writing. My partner passed away Nov 2014:
Unseen
Unheard
You walk beside me
So I have been told.
Almost four years on
Are you still there?
I do not know
But I believe you are.
I have endured the most intense pain,
of grief,
of desperately wanting you,
the brutal loneliness of life without you.
At times I really did not want to carry on.
Yet I am still here.
People tell me I am strong to have faced this monster. I do not feel strong but I know I have an incredible ability to survive to choose life, to live. I feel that change within - wanting to live again. Life will never be the same again, it cannot be, but I am willing to live with this. I do not believe I will have to go through anything as painful or as incredibly hard again. I am willing to LIVE. That feels so positive.
As for my love, he will be forever in my heart. I will ALWAYS love him. I know I am now starting to contemplate letting my love go, if he is ready. I am not quite there yet and I put no pressure on myself however, I feel this will happen when the time feels right,
Lottie x