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Hi everyone. I thought you might enjoy this poem I asked ChatGPT to write about the steroid struggle. I prompted it with this: "Write a rhyming poem from the perspective of a patient with PMR struggling with their dose of prednisone. Make it have a hopeful ending." I posted this a while back on a PMR Facebook group and many people liked it. (If you're in the UK you can replace "prednisone" with "prednisolone".)

"An Ode to Prednisone"

In mornings of despair I woke,

With limbs that ached and heart that broke,

My body's plea was hard to bear,

The curse of PMR was here.

With every step, a battle waged,

The fiery pain was unassuaged,

Until one day, a miracle found,

The wondrous drug that would unbound.

Oh Prednisone, my saving grace,

You took away the pain that chased,

My days of suffering, you dismissed,

Your sweet relief I could not resist.

Yet as the days and months rolled by,

I found your touch was not so kind,

A double-edged sword you proved to be,

Both healing and hurting, simultaneously.

Moon face days and sleepless nights,

The hunger pangs, the inner fights,

Weakened bones, the fragile skin,

With every dose, I feared not win.

A taper down, my goal in sight,

A seemingly endless years-long fight,

Reducing dosage, symptoms back,

Starting over, another attack.

A dance of tapering, high and low,

A never-ending ebb and flow,

Oh Prednisone, I've come to see,

A bittersweet dependency.

But in this battle, hope remains,

A future free from inflammation's chains,

I cling to faith that one day soon,

I'll dance beneath the silver moon.

Oh Prednisone, I'll walk with thee,

Reluctantly, yet necessarily,

And when the day comes to part ways,

I'll bid farewell to your bittersweet haze.

In you, both my miracle and curse,

The answer and the problem versed,

I'll walk the line with you, my friend,

But soon I'll reach this journey's end.

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SheffieldJane

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🤝

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DorsetLadyPMRGCAuk volunteer

You might like this - penned a few years ago - on a similar theme - but not in verse form -

healthunlocked.com/pmrgcauk...

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Grammy80 in reply toDorsetLady

Written very well, I could feel it; the pain, the struggle and then, ah! the peace~!💞

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DorsetLadyPMRGCAuk volunteer in reply toGrammy80

I knew it would resonate with you…. 😊

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Grammy80 in reply toDorsetLady

You know me well~~💞

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Ironic that ChatGPT knows more than a lot of doctors!!!!

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cycli

Enjoyed that and very informative. on the ball.

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powerwalk

🤗👏

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diana1998

Love your poem.

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Jackoh

ChatGPT could perhaps send a note to all GPs giving advice re PMR and GCA and administration of pred? 😂

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sidra1968

That is really good!

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Lochy

That is brilliant - scarily good!

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Nextoneplease

Indeed scarily good 😳 I’ve been wondering about ChatGPT and it seems it’s very knowledgeable….like the idea of sending the poem to GPs!

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Artnmusiclover

I love this!!! Thank you for sharing 👏😊👏

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LemonZest11

Haha, that put a smile on my face … more because artificial intelligence knows more about PMR than the so called qualified intelligencia! Bravo!

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PMRproAmbassador in reply toLemonZest11

Yes - it seems so so maybe it should set up a PMR clinic ...

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LemonZest11 in reply toPMRpro

🤣🤣🙈

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Katietee

Congratulations! Loved your poem, so good and so true. Well done!

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