A Whispering Wave

A breeze that passes by,a sound that I now crave I hear the words of this my wonderful whispering wave This is how I feel angry scared and weak Until I hear the words that my loving angels speak The fresh crisp words they breath wrapped around my mind So many people so many friends all of whom are kind I sense a deeper feeling than I`ve ever felt before As this whispering wave attempts to once again call Now I hear that voice its closer still my journey it will pave Yes I can hear my wonderful whispering wave

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  • hi Shaun

    That is soooo lovely

    Angie x

  • Hi Shaun,

    Beautiful words, thank you...sending you my best wishes love x G x :-)

  • HI Shaun

    What beautiful words. I pray that your loving angels bring you lots of Peace.

    Lots of love, Samixa X :-) :-)

  • Hi Samixa!

    Just looked up your profile! You live very near my daughter! Thinking of you as you go through chemo!

    M

  • Hi Shaun!

    A very moving expression! May we include it in our anthology? It is not set out as verse but it is a poem!

    Margaret!

  • yeh margaret,I did lay it out as a poem but for some reason it came up like this,pleased for you to use those words,

  • Hi Shaun,

    The answer to this is at the end of each line you add a full stop or comma.. Hope this helps if you press the edit button you could do this and then press update.

    Best wishes G 8-)

  • What a lovely, moving poem. Thank you for sharing it with us all.

    Liz X

  • Hi Shaun

    Beautiful! So glad you are feeling a bit supported on this nightmare journey, stay with us. Hoping for some good turns on the road

    Love Wendy xx

  • Hi Shaun

    Very moving and beautiful!

    Stay strong.

    Love Linda xx

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