Another poem - Try to imagine

Thanks for reading. I hope some of you can relate to some aspects of the poem. x

[jacs17]

no need to imagine when you living it every day.Nowere to escape to when your head starts to say,Concentrating is impossible as the cogs start to turn an flow.Deleting everything you had known an flipping it on top the unknown,how far did you travel;as your mind unravels,getting lost in the lucidity as much as the diversity,to plunge on deeper an deeper until we meet the match of our thoughts keeper,they laughed at my stupidity,as much as my taking my tranquility,were to go to escape the obscenities,,as he laughs at lifes,cruelty an mocks your own sanity,to a point of distremity, plunging deeper I fall until quite frankly,i have no control.Life is what it is an that's not always for you to choose,but sure does Make You Fight Or Lose,to new beginnings which you did when born,To thoughts control ,back to learning as another life iunfolds,

[Hidden in reply to jacs17]

That's beautiful Jacs such powerful words. I wrote that poem for a stroke awareness evening ...received a good response.

[2stroke in reply to Hidden]

So,so true,thats a beautiful poem.well thought out and so accurate.Well done.❤️❤️

[Hidden in reply to 2stroke]

Thankyou it was exactly how I felt at the time pleased to say whilst I still have limitations I'm much better these days. 😁

[neilhapgood]

amazing, really enjoyed it

[Hidden in reply to neilhapgood]

Thanks very much Neil

[Peppy2]

How powerful and lovely. Great work