Grace

[-Poetic2]

May the spirit of forgotten love touch you gently on the face and the truth of inspired utterance quietly erase the pain and shame and disappointed, the disenchantment you must have felt. Like mist before the morning sun, may it be gone...Without a trace. Lisah

[fauxartist]

that's beautifully written....please share more when your feeling like sharing ...it's very good work...

[-Poetic2 in reply to fauxartist]

Thanks faux artist. Ok I prefer to recite my poetry but here you go.....Doctor I ‘m gone, can you hear me cry then sigh to carry on? Outside awhile ago listening to the sometimes silent sounds of crickets, full moon reflecting an overcast mood showing only one star I forgot to wish upon. Wishing my life away, unable to produce productive dreams. Dreaming of what I don’t know, won’t know because I can’t get him off my mind. He could be anyone getting me down by not being around, I cannot make a sound tonight. Lisah-

[fauxartist in reply to -Poetic2]

have you taken any prose or poetry classes.....your very good. I am a writter....I write for myself...and believe it or not....by just posting this here....you are now a published writer. Yeah...it's that simple....now your on your way... Just because someone like myself is not well read when it comes to the classics, and I don't have the memory to quote verse from others works of classic poets or writers like Yeats, or who ever, it does not mean we cannot be writers. And even if we can't spell...like myself.....we have Word to correct our spelling...keep on writing my friend....it helps take the power out of our stuff and it's positive and constructive....

[Hidden in reply to fauxartist]

Hi fauxartist I am a writer too and I was wondering what kind of stuff do you like to write?

[fauxartist in reply to Hidden]

I'm writing a book of a character surviving in the middle ages....then....women had to be invisible ....

[Hidden in reply to fauxartist]

Wow that sounds interesting! ; )

[AmIHappy in reply to -Poetic2]

beautiful love ur writing!!

[-Poetic2 in reply to AmIHappy]

Hey girl. Thank you for reading my little poem. My poetry comes from the deepest part of me. It is a survival tool I acquired at the ripe old age of 14! Lol. I wrote for you all my peers my contemporaries... we who walk uphill. Take care.

[AmIHappy in reply to -Poetic2]

thank you ! and wow at the age 14 u have written this is damn gud!

[AmIHappy in reply to AmIHappy]

i would like to hear or read more little poem like this!

[-Poetic2 in reply to AmIHappy]

I am so not 14 lol. That’s when I began writing. How are you doing?

[AmIHappy in reply to -Poetic2]

hi ! im doing fine. what about you??

and thats good that u began writing when u were 14!

[-Poetic2 in reply to AmIHappy]

I am up and down. Going through a rough patch right now. I appreciate this place and my life and head have been in far worse places so it’s ok.

[-Poetic2 in reply to AmIHappy]

Hey, how ya’ doing? I am glad I found this place even though I have not been here long and not around much...I suffer from acute loneliness. You guys help. Hope you all are well.

[AmIHappy in reply to -Poetic2]

im fine! im glad t\i found this place too! what about you? are you alright and hw did ur day go?

[Hidden]

Beautiful!!

[-Poetic2 in reply to Hidden]

Thanks

[-Poetic2 in reply to Hidden]

Hey Hidden. How are you?