Ouch!

[topazrat]

Went to the doctor,

cos my jab it was due.

Saw a different nurse,

She said she was new.

Chatted away,

She drew up the stuff,

Ow, that really hurt!

That was quite rough!

I turned for to look,

A big needle I saw!

One for drawing up,

I stared, with a drop of the jaw!

Is it not enough,

That I have to come here?

You hurt me so much,

Coming again I will fear.

My arm is now sore,

Come up in a bruise!

You hurt and abused,

The nurse I accuse.

I'm sorry she says,

Won't do it next time,

I'll use one much smaller,

Which won't be a crime!

Thank you dear nurse,

For being so kind,

I'll come back again,

I really won't mind.

[clivealive Forum Support]

"Needle-less" to say that's hilarious topazrat

[topazrat in reply to clivealive]

Why thank you. I still can't get the flipping spacing right though even using the shift return method. Ah well, I'm sure people can work out where the line breaks are.

[Foggyme Administrator in reply to topazrat]

Lovely Topazrat...may your future be small needled and bruise free 😀.

And yes, editing on this platform's a bit of a tease...not to mention the mind of its own nonsense maker spellchecker 😱

👍

[topazrat in reply to Foggyme]

Yep, editing is a pain. I don't know if she just forgot to change the needle, or didn't know any better. Perhaps I should take some of my dinky needles down for her next time! I'm only little, I don't need them to use a horse needle