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Not really a poet..

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Hello im not good at poetry at all.. (not like the lovely Gwyn) But i do consider all of you on here my friends. So this is for all of you.

If I could catch a rainbow

I would do it just for you

And share with you its beauty

On the days your feeling blue

If i could Id build a mountain

you could call your very own

A place to find serenity

A place to be alone

If i could take your troubles

I would toss them in the sea

But all of these things im finding

Are impossible to me

I cannot build a mountain

Or catch a rainbow fair

But let me be what i know best

A friend whos always there..

Love to you all.

suzanne

xxx

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Jan76

Suzanne ,

That is beautiful !

Well done you xx

Love Janet xx

Hi Suzanne,

This is such a beautiful poem...I love it..could you do me a favour? and tag it "poems" in the box at the bottom of your blog..you'll have to press edit first.. but you probably know that already it does make it easier to find.. after it has disappeared down the page...blogs very quickly disappear.. left handers day was only Monday and it is on the bottom..If it is not gone already..when it is tagged and I want to read it .. It does make it easier to find and I am trying to keep the poems in one place...for when we put them together.. Thank you for this poem it really is lovely... Lots of love x G x :-)

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hi Gwyn im not sure i know how to do it but i will try. xxx

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You press Edit top right.... Then scroll down to the bottom box on the left and write in poems and then press publish or update not sure now what it says..

Love x G x :-)

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think ive done it Gwyn..

XXX

Glad everyone liked it it took me ages lol. xxx

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Ooooh you have done it.... Well done... it was there when I clicked back haha x x 8-)

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Hi Suzanne,

I see you haven't done it yet...but you could post the pic... and I can't do that !!!.. I just realised you'll find the "tag box" under the "image box"

Lots of love x G x ... sun is out today let's hope it lasts 8-) 8-)

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jurassic

Suzanne, A lovely poem.

Love Marilyn x :)

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bosue

Love the poem. Love Sue x

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angelina

What a lovely poem Suzanne,

It brought a tear to my eyes!!!!!

Love Angie x

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wendydee

Aaah!

Suzanne, what a gorgeous poem ...... You are a poet! You all put me to shame. I've got to be in the right mood for writing and I've been meaning to write something since the idea of a book was first put forward, after Lizzie passed away.

Your poem is very touching

Love Wendy xx

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Hi Wendy,

Plenty of time...once you start you can't stop..haha I'm sure it's a disease...no treatment for this one though...I think Suzanne has quite a talent there..love x G x :-)

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Jacks150

That is beautiful Suzanne. You are good at poetry. The sentiments mean lot to us all.

Thanks Jackie

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