For SorrellHippo - The Kitchen Sink

[Greenthorn]

A plate lay under a saucer

And a saucer lay under a plate

A cup was tucked inside a mug

and two spoons lay embraced.

And all night long,

It was chink to chink

As the waters lapped around

And in the morning

The sink was full.

But not a single sound.

[sassy59]

Very good indeed David. Thank you for that. Xx

[Greenthorn in reply to sassy59]

I've edited. Have another read!

[sassy59 in reply to Greenthorn]

Excellent! 👍😂❤️😘

[Greenthorn in reply to sassy59]

Whoops. I missed the spoons. I've just edited. It was the original line i wasnt happy with!

[SORRELHIPPO]

Very good, a poetic mind.

[Thepainterswife]

😂🤣😂

[Greenthorn in reply to Thepainterswife]

I've edited. As poets do ha ha.

[Alberta56]

😂😂😂.

[Greenthorn in reply to Alberta56]

Alberta, please read again. I've edited.

[Jane2005]

🤣🤣🤣

[Greenthorn in reply to Jane2005]

Sorry Jane. I've slightly adapted the verse. Hope its still ok.

[Jane2005 in reply to Greenthorn]

Yes still brilliant 😁

[Greenthorn in reply to Jane2005]

Whoops. The spoons now lay embraced. Ha ha. ❤️

[Katinka46]

Bit of a head-scratcher 🤔 until I read SH’s post.Love them both.

Thank you

Xxx

[Greenthorn in reply to Katinka46]

I've changed the words. Bad boy.

[watergazer]

Love it x

[Greenthorn in reply to watergazer]

I've messed around with the water. Please read again. 🙏

[watergazer in reply to Greenthorn]

Excellent 👍

[HollyBoyd]

They love to multiply, great rhyme Greenthron xxx 😊

[Greenthorn in reply to HollyBoyd]

Whoops. I've re-edited. Hope you still like it. 😊

[HollyBoyd in reply to Greenthorn]

Yes I do prefer the edited one, sounds more romantic xxx 😊

[Alberta56]

Very good again.