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I write a lot of poetry

As most on here will see

I'm sure that many wonder

Just why that should be

Wordsworth with his wandering

And other poets might be

Much better at it than I am

But they haven't got COPD

So their poems rarely mention.

Breathlessness and coughs

So I'm filling a gap in the market

If anyone out there scoffs

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SquirrelsHolt

Morning Mr.D. and my first chuckle of the day! Who knew you'd be able to find the funny side of COPD?

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Candyred

Aww love love this .. don’t think I’ve ever read a poem with copd in it! Huge hugs xx

in reply toCandyred

Well you have to admit, Rosie, it loses some of it's charm. 🙄

I wandered lonely in a cloud

That floats on high o'er vales and hill

When all at once I saw a crowd

Of people who looked rather ill

Wheezing and coughing beneath the tree

A group of folk with COPD

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Candyred in reply to

It will only loose the charm if you let it! .. huge hugs Mr D xx

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Burs

Hi don-1931. I like the idea of poetry just for us laboured breathers lol. Another laugh out loud rhyme, it certainly brightens my day xxx love burs xxxx

Thanks again Don. How about filling another gap and getting ‘gob’ in.🤭

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He liked to play a little tune,

By gobbing in a brass spittoon. (Not good breakfast reading.)

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Makes me think of those big old Victorian pubs.

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Katinka46

Absolutely... tell it as it is. A lot of poets had consumption of course. Not quite the same.

Keep them coming.

Really cheers us up and keeps us going.

K xx

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sassy59

No scoffing here Don. You’re a master poet that’s for sure. Take care. Xxxx 😘😘🥰

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hypercat54

I wold never scoff at you my friend. I look forward to your lovely poems and always end up thinking you have missed your vocation Don. 👀💋💖 x

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roz38

Another brilliant poem. Still chuckling.

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Kittykat2

Another great one Don 👍🏻

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knitter

I am going to put a spanner in the works, sorry Don.

My fellow country man the asthmatic Dylan Thomas wrote a short story , ' Extraordinary Little Cough'

Not a poem though, so you are still the COPD poet

Better than the original in my opinion Don. Now write one for me please, Bronchiectasis!

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You have to be joking, I can't even say it! 🤔

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BrianTaylor in reply to

😂

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HungryHufflepuff in reply to

If you’ve got one of those unpronounceable diseases

Or just wracked with coughs and sneezes

Don Rhymer comes along and the opportunity he seizes

To write us a poem and everyone he pleases 👍

in reply toHungryHufflepuff

Oh I do like that, thank you. 👏😀

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Rattle in reply toHungryHufflepuff

👏

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MoyB

Don, you are really clever to keep coming up with these great odes! I love reading them. xx Moy

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Whitechinchilla

Simply brilliant Don, as always.

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JANET127

Mr Don! I put our completed poem on this site....That was fun..Thank you! Its under COPD Janet127 Poet Mr Don Poet...Hope you don't mind! All your poems are Great!

Oh right! Well it’s there whether I like it or not in’it. 🤔

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JANET127 in reply to

Did I overstep your boundaries? I am sorry......

in reply toJANET127

I have no boundaries but I try to avoid repeating myself.

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JANET127 in reply to

You won't have to repeat what you said. I hear you loud and Clear. Sorry.

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majji

12 out of 10 for that one Cap'n ....

in reply tomajji

I wish you could do my shopping for me. 🤣

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majji in reply to

Lol - am having trouble keeping up with that myself Cap'n - do you do any online shopping and have it delivered?

in reply tomajji

As you might expect I wrote a poem about my online ordering 🙄

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majji in reply to

Now I really like that one Cap'n - so glad you dredged it up from the deep - many thanks

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majji

I don't recollect having seen that - but of course I have chemo fudge brain now ....

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HungryHufflepuff in reply tomajji

I didn't remember seeing it either but I didn't like to say especially as I don't have a good excuse (to say I have chocolate fudge brain could seem crass and insensitive). I hadn't realised you're having chemo. I hope it's all going ok and you're as well as can be 💐

in reply toHungryHufflepuff

I write a lot of forgettable stuff so don't beat yourself up. 😄

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majji in reply toHungryHufflepuff

Lol HungryHufflepuff chocolate fudge brain sounds simply scrumptious, I would really enjoy that I am sure and would happily swap - thank you for your good wishes, I really appreciate your sentiments :-)

in reply tomajji

It wasn't a memorable piece so it doesn't surprise me that you don't recall it. 😄

But the old search engine dragged it back up just the same.

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majji

Three cheers for the old search engine . . . hip hip hoorayyyyyyyyyyyyy

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