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I don't suppose I could stop writing my silly rhymes even if I wanted to. I wrote this one about a year ago and I remember skischool wrote a reply which still makes me laugh when I think about it.

The funeral was a good one,

With lots of people there.

Some were very good friends of his

Others just went to stare.

As they put the coffin

Into the standing hearse

A hand popped from under the lid

And scribbled a little verse

"By eck", said a bystander

That's just like our Don,

He had to do just more rhyme

Before buggers gone.

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newlands

Yes I remember that one

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sassy59

Yes I remember it too Don. Xxx

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skischool

Well you crafty bugger,not long after that you did an aboriginal on us and went walkabout.so i can't even go back in time and cut and paste that witty reply.but you don't need my replies to churn out your well crafted rhymes and to cut a long boring story short keep them coming old friend until even the box is covered and send a few more from t'other side if you have time.

Love Ski's and Scruff's x

in reply toskischool

Allow me skischool :

Just then there came a whisper,

"Even dead he acts the clown."

Should have done just what I told them,

And screwed the bugger down.

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WheezyAnne

Wonderful.

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joyce74

Had monthly breath easy letter arrived yesterday and under the heading of Dons Rhyme was your BE Happy verse . Thanks for letting me share them. Those letters go out to around 100 people so you are getting quite a fan club.

in reply tojoyce74

Good heavens, that's nice. :-) Perhaps I should go back and read and take heed of some of my own stuff.

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johnboy_10

Keep them coming for a long time yet

The rhymes, the poems, that we get

They cheer us up, they make us glad

To be without them would make us sad.

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Jaybird19

brilliant don , made my saturday.

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