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I always write my feelings n thoughts down into short poems. It is how I deal with everything I go through. I recently posted on the fibromyalgia forum recently to open their eyes to how injecting has helped me. I hope u like my poem it’s the first one I have written about B12 😊🤗💜

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Rexz

Hi SlothMode, excellent! Love it!

I often write my feelings/experiences in poems also. It does help, I think good therapy.

Rexz

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SlothMode in reply toRexz

Hiya Rexz,

Yes I’ve found u can scream n cry quietly in poems lol. Glad u loved my poem I like to share all I’ve written. I also add small pictures I enjoy creating too 😊🤗💜

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Jillymo

Hi SlothMode,

Your poem should be hung in every Drs surgery in the country. Whether they read it or not is another matter. 🤔

I like the brick wall effect behind it, very appt.

Well done,

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SlothMode in reply toJillymo

Hiya Jillymo,

Feel free to share it. The brick wall had to be there as doctors have this wall they put up between themselves n their patients when it comes to the mention of B12. Hmm maybe we should start selling tshirts with it on 😂😊🤗💜

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Jillymo in reply toSlothMode

Hi ya SlothMode - the name I can relate to.

Drs and Consultants alike have slung me at that damned brick wall so many times over the years. I have come out of consulting rooms feeling totally defeated so many times over the years. 😡

Maybe now I have a diagnosis from gastrollogy I should get the poem tattoed on my bum.

They are more than welcome to look at that, most are arrogant bleep.

🤣 Xx

We are just a number on a long list
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SlothMode in reply toJillymo

lol I love that idea 😂😂😂

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Ghound

Hi, Thanks for your excellent poem - succinct and hard hitting !

Says it all ! Xx

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SlothMode in reply toGhound

Hiya Ghound,

I’m happy u enjoyed my poem thanks. Maybe u need it on a tshirt too 🤭😊🤗💜

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Ghound in reply toSlothMode

I'd love to turn up at my local surgery wearing that !!! 😃💛 xx

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Peter2345556

I like it! The struggle with treating PA in the UK is not necessary and very unfortunate. (Live in Canada). Stay determined! Sloth photo taken in my recent trip to Costa Rica!

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SlothMode in reply toPeter2345556

Hiya Peter,

Yes it is a shame they don’t always do their duty of care when it comes to B12. On a nicer note I love the photo u captured of a distant relative 😊🤗💜

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wedgewood

Hello Canada 🇨🇦! Thanks for the photo !

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Cobalt1312

Thanks for the wonderful poem SlothMode! Powerful and beautiful

Thank you SlothMode, for the woderful poem, and if you are going to put it on t-Shirts, please may I order one. Size XXL and I will wear it into the surgery every time I go there!!!!!!!

My GP even had the gall to tell me he "had done his due diligence", then he performed the Neurological exam I had asked him for 20 months previously, it was such a mini neuro exam, he didn't even get out of his chair for it, neither was I asked to stand up out of mine. The entire thing took 45 seconds.

At the end of it he said he would send me to a neurologist. It took another 8 months for that to happen, but the Neuro sent me for an MRI right away and also several other tests I am still waiting for appointments for. The neuro also pointed out my thyroid was poorly controlled (TSH 10), even though my GP was surprised that my "Thyroid was perfect"!!!

There are days when I can understand people who take a gun and then do a mass shooting of people in the place where they have been treated so shabbily. The health system in this country is so lucky, that I have an unbreakable iron rule that is all violence is only to take place in my imagination.

But please, the T-shirt, yes please I need to wear that

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