Words

[randomphantoms]

The wrecking ball

Came smashing through

Putting an end

To all that was you.

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As, in shock,

You stand and stare

Wondering

"What, if any, of me is left there?"

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To your amazement

Some whole bricks survive.

They are parts of you

That are still alive.

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Take time to grieve

For all you have lost

And don't even try

To count the cost.

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There is more I will post later just brain sore long weekend .

Love n hugs

Xoxo

*****************have rested so here's more.

The worst case scenario

For the very few

Is that you can make lots

Of pretty rockeries to view.

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Yet for the majority

It's time to re build.

So make it a palace

with treasures filled.

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[cat3]

Love it Random ! The concept of a wrecking ball is genius.

xx

[randomphantoms in reply to cat3]

Genius? Just my brain fixating on an advert.

[cat3 in reply to randomphantoms]

xx

[peaches2]

Fantastic! xx

[AliCathy]

Thank you for sharing your amazing, understanding poem. I am really grateful to read a fascinating, reflecting creation of how we are affected by grim brain damage.

[paxo05]

Simple words that say so much.

Genius random.

Pax x

[Elenor3]

Wonderfully put great to read thank you

[Hidden]

Lovely writing which really strikes a chord with anyone who has known what it is like to have a BI. The 'time to grieve' bit is so true and the one which we don't all always get. If we are lucky we can rebuild and find a degree of tranquility but boy, does it take ages sometimes and yes, there is almost always a lot of loss. I wish a tranquil, pain free and calm day to you all.