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CURSED ... Not With Some COMMEN COLD

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Nothing some chicken soup and good nights sleep will cure make go away eather.

But a god awful LUNG disease.

And here is how the story GO’s there was a anonymous cantankerous lung diseased man who live down the street behind a mask, he could of been anybody. Your neighbour, partner a work college a brother.

He appeared to be the most cantankerous man you ever would meet. his booming vile coughs spluttering and curses could be heard far wide, he had a frazzled blown up look about him that would have everyone flee in fear dismay.

If only people could see what lays deep within THEY would see a man in a daily struggle who could hardly talk walk catch he’s breath LET alone repeat him self

He always seemed to be dying from some god awful disease.

He'd emerge from his home covered in fag ash egg and beans struggling to breath.

He’d look to the heavens with garden gate to steady him and he’s stick in hand waiting to catch he’s breath when he would try to make is move.

With a fart rumble and a splutter this anonymous cantankerous man in he’s mask would try raise a strained smile.

The neighbours rumbled complained given he appeared antisocial diseased grumpy always awful is ALL the neighbours could WOULD see.

WAS this cantankerous man in a mask THAT coughed spluttered and farted

Neighbours would say rumble he should be committed, He’s diseased insane.

Not knowing THE man behind the mask and what lays deep within BUT given the ignorance not knowing the cantankerous man in the mask HOW could they know ONE summers night, a few years back beheld an incredible sight.

This cantankerous dieased man in a mask was just like ME and YOU till this god awful lung disease took he’s life and breath away.

luckily for THIS man this god awful lung disease HAD not taken his memoirs.

Starring out of HIS window YOU would see this cantankerous man in mask behind battered old window frames.

Looking for ghosts from his past.

His hands would tremble with emotion with the life he once had lost NOW as.

A photo a memory and a salty wet tear he gassp treasure THINKING what as happened NOW to his life.

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That’s as much of the story I can think of SO if others would like to ADD finish.

Feel free to post in comment

Gosh gosh gosh .. and I nearly forgot STORY I come up with after being inspired by British Lung Foundation tv advert .. :)

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Tricity125

Hi. That's really cool. But u must have Finnish u may or may not know you could be a poet. If can. Then stories and tunes. Not a lot difference. U. Could really have a impact on how times. Depends how much you would like to be successful. Maybe just happy to pen for yourself and others. But I fill you. Truly. Have a talent. Well. 3/4 quarter s. Maybe. You will finish. This. But. I think. Even though its Real cool. It needs a. Blinding ending. What. And why. Did you come up with this idea. Writing is a gift. Have you always been able to write. You really do. Have to complete. If u can then. Who knows. Well I think. You have talent. BW. PJ

in reply toTricity125

Hi cheers given my writing issues.

I do like to write interesting letters THAT capture and have impact on reader WELL like to make them interesting.

I guess when ever inspired I try to nock something out.

Anyway glad you liked commented :)

Lung disease is neglected in terms of research and treatment for patients MOST doctors think is all self inflicted guess story is reflection frustration BUT was inspired

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sassy59

Well done JAS that’s very impressive.

He’s staring out of the window thinking of the family and friends he once had.

Nobody visits now but he does have one neighbour who does a bit of shopping and takes him to appointments.

If only people could see behind the mask............

Anyone else? Xxxxxx

in reply tosassy59

Hi sassy cheers thanks for ya reply comment ITs amazing how when you try do something mind go’s blank.

Thanks for few good snipits:)

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Your welcome xxxxx

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Ergendl

In a tin box in the old dresser, he keeps an old birthday greeting card, faded and grubby after years of taking it out and remembering the dear one who gave it to him. In the card is a dried grey green four leaf clover. When he touches it, he is transported back to that wonderful sunny day in May when life was full of promise....

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Hi Ergendl thanks for reply comment love when life was full of promise.

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SquirrelsHolt

Sorry JAS I dont have the ability to put down words that tell a tale. I can fill out forms and alike but dont have your skills! Reckon you keep going for sure. BTW,the nose and whiskers in your "picture" made me laugh!

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Hi SquirrelHolt thanks for comment reply GLAD like my whiskers NEVER knew I could look so good lol.

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Caspiana

Hello Jeff. 👋

My writing skills are rubbish, but wanted to say your ears and whiskers suit you very well. 😃

An interesting story indeed! Keep writing. 😊

Cas xx 🐇

in reply toCaspiana

Hi Caspiana Cheers n thanks for reply comment.. mine writing not that that great eather BUT don’t let little thing like that stop me .... 😉

Was surprised how well I looked with some flappy ears n whiskers MEOW 🐱

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Tricity125

Love yr. t shirt. Wow. That a wicked. Green. I do hope u can had the ending I as real deep. See you. Pj.

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