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If you decide to come to America......

Please raise the Titanic from the Ocean Floor!

Find all her treasures and skeletons.....

Wax the decks,unlock the Captains door!

But they've been down to the Titanic......

And pinched most what was there!

So I don't fancy trying to visit....

To find the cupboards bare!

But you may find some skeletons..

With no breathing problems on board....

Some are still laughing an dancing....

"MY KIDS" says the Lord!

My cupboards are full of skeletons...

I don't need anymore!

I'm past laughing and dancing....

Just want somewhere to Snore!

NO storing allowed on the Titanic....

Not while she's on the ocean floor.....

Get up-Wake up Mr Don.......

Too many areas we can explore!

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Wonderful...😊 collaboration you two!! And I've always been fascinated with the Titanic. So very sad. Have a lovely weekend! xx 🙋

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watergazer

What a team!

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Izb1

Hey this is a good one, but where Don is the sketch? Cant have a poem with out one, x

Absolutely fabulous ! Thankyou for the laugh x

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Cookstir

My friend was just talking about seeing the Titanic the other day, he said he knew it was going to sink and yelled it loudly for all to hear. After yelling this for a third time, the management finally kicked him out of the theater

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