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I love this poem.....

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I hope you love it too. Have you ever met anyone who changed your life?...Ali

A memorable Person

On a train going south on business

For what seemed an eternity,

I chanced upon a memorable man

Who changed the path of my destiny

He was itinerant to look at

With tatty coat and shabby shoes,

An unshaven face, his hair unkempt

And string, as a belt on his ‘trews’

He boarded the train, peoples heads dropped

For fear that his gaze they’d meet

He walked down the aisle, disappointed,

As no-one would give up a seat

I offered the seat beside me

He thanked me for making the space

I replied with a sincere ‘you’re welcome’

And a smile warmed his weathered face

He asked me about my journey

And I asked of his in return

I felt in my heart, that by talking to him

There was much about life I could learn

I bought us both refreshments

As he told of his life’s history,

Once in a while I would interject

With a small anecdote about me

Behind the shabby persona,

Was a man of intelligent mind

He’d lived on the edge in finance,

Made his fortune, left it behind

As his bank account grew he’d lost everything

His family, his friends, his wife

He’d found out, too late, and at great cost

That there was so much more to life

‘You have to stop and smell the roses,

Make some time for those you hold dear’

And as he spoke, down his rugged cheek

I saw the track of a small, salty tear

As we reached the end of our journey

He clasped my hand at our time to part,

He thanked me for my company

And told me I had a good heart

When I got to my lonely hotel room,

I called my daughters on the phone

And told them ‘we’ll be together soon

I’m taking some time off when I get home.’

Sometimes it takes a chance meeting

To give your whole life a shake

I felt I had met my ‘Hermes’

And now had decisions to make

When I got home, I made a decision

The missed years with my girls I’d amend,

My life took a different direction

All down to my indigent friend

You can’t judge a man on appearance

But if you look in their eyes you can,

I knew in the instant I gave up the seat

I had met a remarkable man.

By Janette Fisher

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jeanjeannie50 profile image
jeanjeannie50

Love it, there's a strong message there!

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Agoodenough in reply to jeanjeannie50

Lovely isn’t it. 💚

I really love that one Ali, a very strong message. Take time to stop and think about where you are going in life, could you change things......

Thank you so much for sharing.

Alicia🙏😊🌈

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Yes I for one definitely used to rush through life and not see what was right in front of me.

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Same here and since last Autumn when I started to walk more frequently in my local area, makes you realise the beauty we have around us.

Hope you've had a good day.

Alicia 🌈😊

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Sunfloweronline

I’m thinking that I have met a good few people who have influenced my life journey

My headteacher

Sandra

My John

Mary my colleague

Maureen

But I’m also thinking that Covid19 is going to make my future life journey,

Kinder

More mindful

More appreciative

Conservationist

Give according to my means

Not waste time

We can all make a positive recovery by doing our best

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Stub007

Superb! Thanks.

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Activity2004

What a wonderful poem/saying. It gives you a chance to sit and think.😀👍🌈

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Agoodenough in reply to Activity2004

Certainly does. Makes you wonder the flip side too. Maybe we have unwittingly changed someone life too.

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Roukaya

Amazing

A chance encounter can inextricably change the course of your life

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Agoodenough in reply to Roukaya

It certainly can. I think as you get older you find this more 🙂

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Borth195

That is so true really makes you realise what is important in life not all about material things

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Agoodenough in reply to Borth195

Absolutely. 🙂

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Red1246

Beautiful. What a lesson to all. Thank you so much for sharing this. It’s the last thing I shall read before bed. A wonderful way to end my day. Be well. 🌷

Kathleen

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Agoodenough in reply to Red1246

You’re welcome. Have a good night 💤

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sandravale

Fantastic

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Agoodenough in reply to sandravale

🙂

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footgo

Thank you Ali, this poem certainly gets my memory bank into overdrive. In my very full life I have met so many people that have left their mark on me, mostly happily, amazing people.

I will mention just three, if l may, the first was Mrs Margaret Le Riche, my head teacher in Jinja, Uganda, EA, this was in the early 1950s. She not only taught me my normal school lessons, she taught me so very much more about life, nature, people, she was an exceptionally kind person, always. Leaving Jinja l kept in contact with her for almost thirty years, when she unfortunately disappeared off my radar screen.

The second person was Mr Leo Aaron's the American photographer whom l worked for in Chelsea, London in the early 1960s. He was an exceptionally good photographer and businessman and he taught me to always appreciate the good things in life, never to accept second best and to be kind to fellow humans.

The third person is my very dearest wife who l married in 1986, we have two amazing children both loving and caring, our son, now living in Hong Kong, whom we all miss him terribly, our daughter lives close to us so we normally see her quite often with her beautiful daughter. Sadly in October 1999 l was ‘struck down’ with arthritis and have had to have all my major joints replaced plus other operations, sixteen in total. The one person who has taught me more about love, kindness and happiness is my most wonderful wife who has definitely stood by me through thick and thin.

I also feel that we can all learn a lot from our fellow members of Healthunlocked, all bravely showing so much courage in their difficult lives.

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Agoodenough in reply to footgo

What a lovely response. I’m glad my post got you reminiscing about the important people in your life that we should never forget.

That’s a lot of operations and health problems to have to overcome and in a marriage these things either push you apart or bring you closer together so I’m pleased you feel you have had such great support from your wife. It must be so difficult for people who don’t feel supported.

I agree there is so much to learn from the fellow members of Healthunlocked and those people who have such a positive attitude whilst suffering such adversity is admirable.

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springcross

Age, that is absolutely brilliant, it brought a few tears to my eyes I can tell you. Do you mind if I copy it for another forum?

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Agoodenough in reply to springcross

No not at all go ahead. Glad you liked it. Makes me wonder how many life changing people we could have overlooked in our life time x

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springcross in reply to Agoodenough

Absolutely, I agree. Thanks for this. xx

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RoadRunner44

Another poignant message to keep and reflect on from time to time.

Hit home a few truths I would suspect.

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AndrewT

Dear Agoodenough,

WOW, is that 'Yours' or did you just Find It somewhere?

I met a girl, on a train, some years ago now- I can't remember which train, where I was going, or anything. The girl however, I will never forget, She was of fairly Normal build, neither fat nor thin, unremarkable in height, indeed not noticeably large/ small in any 'department'.

What made this otherwise unremarkable girl, 'stand out', were her Many, Many Piercings and Tattoos- in her Ears, Nose, through her Lips, Tongue, some in her Neck. There were Tattoos on her Face, Neck, Hands, Feet and some, partly visible, on her Arms and Legs. To me, she appeared a 'Slut'- prejudice had, set in, I'm afraid.

I can't remember how, but somehow, I got 'Talking', to this girl..... What a lovely, warm hearted, intelligent girl she was! She was on her way, to see her, Grandmother- who had been in Hospital. Her appearance, which I asked about it, was because of a 'Music Following' of some sort.... Apparently the Musicians 'All had Tattoos and Stuff'. (The Girl did explain 'everything').

So yes, MY Prejudices were 'Challenged', and I learned a Lot, from that Lovely girl. I wish that I had asked her, for her 'contact details' now, but it didn't seem the right time somehow. I certainly Learned a Valuable 'life lesson', from this Girl, and no mistake. A Lesson, for us all perhaps.

I still 'Remember' her, in my Prayers- Thank you Tattooed Girl.

AndrewT

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Agoodenough in reply to AndrewT

Well that's a lovely story and I think most of us can say we have decided what someone is like just by looking at them. As you get older you appreciate more that these assumptions are normally non founded.

I wish I could take credit for the poem but I found it. It's great isnt it.

Enjoy your evening

Ali

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hairbrain4

Very nice. It makes you re-think how you react to others.

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RLN-overcomer

I really live my life trying to help people who are in need. My mom raised me, and my siblings to treat all people with respect, and to treat all people the same way you would want to be treated. This poem did bring me to tears, as I am remembering the many homeless people who can't self isolate, or have to go to shelters that are dangerous for them to be in.

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Agoodenough in reply to RLN-overcomer

Well this is what you have to remember. If could be any of us but for the grace of God x

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RLN-overcomer in reply to Agoodenough

Amen

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