my new cat novel- feedback sought.

[JULIETstevens]

i was an aspiring author pre TBI (locked into a job as a partner in a law firm) post TBI i'm now an author- been published online by the brain charity and more to come..... I'm writing a book about cats set in yeovil for the yeovili literary prize next year. just wondering if anyone wants to reads the first few chapters to give feedback......juliet.

[bonfire]

I am happy to ( depending on my energy) do you want to pm it to me? Bonfire

[JULIETstevens in reply to bonfire]

thanks so much, i really appreciate it. If you want to DM me, then i'll send it back to you..... (edited by admin to remove email address - please send the member a private message to discuss the book)

[bonfire in reply to JULIETstevens]

How long is your story please? B

[JULIETstevens in reply to bonfire]

3,400 words! not too long- all about cats going on an adventure

[bonfire in reply to JULIETstevens]

hi Juliet, just letting you know it isn’t in my inbox on this site as an attachment

[JULIETstevens in reply to bonfire]

sorry, admins told me to paste it into a private message to you, which is what i did- I pasted it into a private message to you. didn't you receive it?

[JULIETstevens in reply to JULIETstevens]

i think i've PM'd it to you now, but let me know if you don't receove it. Sorry if it's a total pile of dog dirt!

[MimiSpree]

I LOVE cats and I too write, so I would be honored to be a reader for you.

Moxie, my kitten popping out of my sweater.

[JULIETstevens in reply to MimiSpree]

So great to hear you write too? what sort of thing do you write? I get such a buzz out of it, just locve writing and editing my work- what are you eorking on at the moment? I'm editing my cat book today while the girls are at school. Just been out for a hot choc with community support visitor- i love her visits, feels like chatting to an old friend, though i know she's being paid to see me!

[JULIETstevens in reply to MimiSpree]

i will DM it to you again. let me know if you don't receive it... juliet.

[JULIETstevens]

i've PM'd it to you. thanks loads.

[MimiSpree]

I apologize for my delayed response. So far I LOVE it! You're a very good writer. I hope to finish it tonight and I will be back in touch immediately. It's great!

[JULIETstevens in reply to MimiSpree]

oh wow, you like it. That makes my decade. thanks so mucgh for taking your precious time to read it, you are very kind and wonderful and i can't thank you enough.