ode to a crow

[JanellenGrimaldi]

there's this big black crow

that i've come to know

she perches high

within the sky.

but when she's low,

she takes it slow.

she will always comes back,

for she doesn't lack

for a single thing.

she cannot even really sing!

but this black bird

has got the word,

that tomorrrow is another day,

and just maybe

there will be another way.

[Carrigan]

Thought this was sad at first, but no like it, suppose we've all seen the black crow

[JanellenGrimaldi in reply to Carrigan]

Glad you liked it! Poe wrote "The Raven" and no doubt saw the black crow often! PD is THE BLACK CROW! ^ _ ^

[TaniaV]

That was beautiful

[JanellenGrimaldi]

Thanks! I am a singer, but I have so many allergies bugging me right now that my voice sounds like a crow! Crows, by the way are very intelligent birds, I heard..(another rhyme! hahaha!:))

[Court]

Really enjoyed this. We all have a black crow which is sometimes more tiresome than others.

[JanellenGrimaldi in reply to Court]

Thanks Court!

[gran5-]

hey janelle, why don't we set up a PD poetry blog or slam or something. I write a lot of poetry, also. Haven't posted any yet. Oh sh** here comes that fatigue again.gotta lie down. Maybe I'll try Dragon