Parkinson's Movement
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Mr. Parkie

Here I was merrily skipping

along life's path,

with a song in my heart and

a dance in my soul

When I suddenly stumbled

Did not even have a chance to grumble

I did not feel the invasion

so stealthily it did happen

One moment I was skipping

And the next moment I was slipping

Mr. Parkie Mr. Parkie

U are rude and sneaky

U came in without a squeak

and made me unable to speak

u took over my body

pretty as u please

without asking

may i please?

Mr. Parkie Mr. Parkie

U are rude and sneaky

U came in and occupied

and i am petrified

U are on a killing spree

killing all my brain cells

U are in control of my

body parts shaking them

as u please

U took over my mind

my body but u ain't got my soul

No no no u ain't got my soul

Hey Mr. Parkie

if you think I am just

gonna roll over and play dead

u don't know what u got instead

I am gonna fight u

u uninvited guest

I am gonna kick u out

just u wait and see

may just be wishful thinking on my part

but it is my wish

and in that i can do as i wish

and i wish u go away far far away

Mr.Parkie....I do not need u

go away go away go away!!!

14 Replies

Great poem you have a great talent, and a great spirit keep up the good you do and thankyou x


oh thank u for the kind u know humor is imp to keep goin at my attempt....I have been trying to kick Mr.Parkie out....but "the jerk" is very stubborn:)))


I can identify with your poem. It is very good. I also write poetry,it helps to get our feelings out.Some days it is hard to fight this horrible monster that has invaded us.P>U>S>H pray until something happens. We cannot let the monster win.We are going to be the winners when a cure us found.


Brooke....I find writing very therapeutic and a sense of humor helpful...otherwise life wud be the pits....We cannot let the monster win..I have nicknamed him Mr.Parkie and am trying my best to kick him out:PPPP


Very nice. I think we all feel the same way about Mr. Parkie!


One person we all would love to kick out or as I say wud be nice to have a Block button:P oh well we try...everyday is a struggle as only we know....


SuKas...Love this! Great job at putting into words the way we all feel.


:)) Thank u.... some of the feelings are so difficult to articulate verbally and works in writing....


Thank you. I cannot write poetry to save my life, but you have, and you have exceeded most people's wildest expectations.


hahah thank u...well we all have our talents...and this is something for me just pours out of my heart:)) I am so so glad if this helped u smile even a lil bit:))


dat is such a true poem describes us parkies hope they find a cure


I hear you and I hope they find a cure soon getting really tired of that jerk Parkie:)


yes dat parkie is such a jerk how long ru living with him im only new 2 him has me wrecked everyday


8 years today....


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