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Another year has been and gone

Could it be my last?

I'm feeling pretty much the same

If anyone should ask.

Looking around at what's going on

Things look much the same

The obituaries that I'm reading

Do not contain my name

So off I go for another ride

On the rollercoaster of life

With Smudge my lovely rescue cat

Sitting where should be my wife

There's much I could complain about

But what good would that do?

With all you riding with me

We make a motley crew.

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sassy59

A motley crew indeed Don. Nice to be able to ride along though and good to have Smudge on board. Great poem once again. Xxx🤗🫶🏻🩷

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Nula2

Aww lovely poem Don. Would be proud to motor along with you and the Smudge (I'd be quite happy in the back seat - wouldn't dream of upstaging Smudge) 😊🐈‍⬛xxx

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Dottie11

It is such a lovely verse. xx

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Greenthorn

One of your finest Don and sums up much of where we oldies are. I can't help my mind racing each time you set up a rhyming couplet, asking myself, "how is Don going to crown this one?" or "how is he going to top it?". Like the cherry on the cake. It's all fun isn't it and for sure, you take us for a ride each time. A sleigh ride for sure.

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Greenthorn

Obituary is a funny word,

It's what one reads when dead,

I only hope it ain't me who's died

But someone else instead.

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Nula2 in reply toGreenthorn

🤣gave me a chuckle 😊xxx

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Alberta56 in reply toGreenthorn

Very good- love it. xxx

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Zand60

Fantastic 🤩 how do you do it?Lesley xx

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Jaybird19

I have an instant picture of smudge in passenger seat !

thank you don for another great poem

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Morrison10

well done todays poets, finally had time to reply. Hope they give you satisfaction. Best regards, Jean.

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helenlw7

We are indeed a motley clue, but I’m sure we’re all happy to read your humourous posts.

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Germantara

I absolutely loved reading you're poem brilliantly put together well done

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Katinka46

Great, thank you. Yup. Just keep at it.

Love and a stroke for your companion.

Kate xxx

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leo60

Motley crew indeed Don, there's no denying that! xx

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djbctla

Aye aye skipper. BERNARDINE

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Ern007

Cracking verse Donald - Quite sure it's not your last, you are a very talented poet DON. Take care and stay warm

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Danielmystar

Happy birthday Don sorry its late x

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Donald_1931 in reply toDanielmystar

Thank you Val, it’s never too late to wish someone happiness. 🤗x

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Spoticus

Happy Birthday Don I’m a bit late xxx

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Rattle

Happy birthday and happy travelling Don!

A lovely poem, thank you xx

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Bingo88

Oh that was good. Donald. Hope your day goes well. Brian

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Izb1

Belated birthday wishes to you Don 🎂🍾🍺🎁🎈 another year to celebrate having you with us, from one of the motley crew x

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Donald_1931 in reply toIzb1

Thanks, I try to ignore birthdays they seem to be coming far too often. 😂x

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watergazer

keep riding that roller coaster Don x

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Nicholatracy

Great poem 🐞🐞

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Donald_1931 in reply toNicholatracy

Wordsworth must be spinning in his grave.😉x

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Alberta56 in reply toDonald_1931

i bet he 'd say 'Well done, Mr. Don.

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suef

Brilliant Donald. We are indeed a motley crew. X

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Alberta56

Love it. xxx

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Stratos20

Belated birthday greetings Don. Here’s to a happy, healthy (as well as can be) year. Cheers 🥂

Belated birthday wishes Don 🎂 🐑🐑🐑🐏🐑 🐈

Proud to be one of your motley crew 😊

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adenough

Beautifully written Don.. I remember when we looked forward to birthdays, but not now & like you I wonder if it’s my last.. but we soldier on in hope.. The best we can hope for is just not to wake up one day, so I am trying to make the best of the time we have left.. send you some love from me & my pooch ❤️❤️xx

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