How can i improve my drawing?

[coolkitty1934]

Well i was bored in class and started drawing this is the result anyway i would like people to have 2 things in their comment if possible

-1 thing you like

-1 thing you think i could improve on

im looking forward to your comments UwU

[Salma2289]

Hello there, I really like the drawing a lot, feel like it’s 3D drawing. I think you can work on this 3D methods. Keep drawing it’s really amazing. Send you my love

[coolkitty1934 in reply to Salma2289]

thanks!

[Hidden in reply to coolkitty1934]

please ask LC and others about therapuetic art as its freer adn fun...v formal......neither more correct......great job

[coolkitty1934 in reply to Hidden]

thanks UwU

[gleason9guy]

It reminds me of a reptilian eye and or a space craft. If I had drawn this, I would go back and draw the claw like things on the sides to be more symmetrical. Nice stream of conciousness art!

[coolkitty1934 in reply to gleason9guy]

thank you UwU i am actually thinking of redrawing the eye on a clean paper then having claw marks over the paper showing different parts of the body maybe a tail sticking out or something

[gleason9guy in reply to coolkitty1934]

I can't help but look at it and see it as a puzzle piece to the other parts of the complete face that forms while staring at it. Kind of like my grandfathers painting of a clown that had eyes that always seemed to be looking at you regardless from which part of the room you were looking.

[coolkitty1934 in reply to gleason9guy]

...okay creepy thought but thanks UwU

[gleason9guy in reply to coolkitty1934]

If you notice, I'm Gleason 9 guy. For some of us, this is the waiting room for death. So actually, I thought I was being upbeat by even responding. I was a professional artist for a long time. Art is perhaps at it's best when it is unnerving. That's why you paint dragon's eyes.

[Blueruth]

The brush strokes have energy. Fast doodles are good. The design is interesting. It is organic and exoskeletal which is why I think it is like some sort of bug or reptilian. It could use more contrast. I can see shadows but they are a little light. I went to a college where critiques could be brutal but my favorite part for learning. Hope that is what you are looking for.

[coolkitty1934 in reply to Blueruth]

its a dragon eye! hmm okay so darker shadows got it.also since i did this half asleep in first period math i didnt have much room/time besides i am HORRIBLE at proportions and fitting everything together it only really looks good with just one part at a time UwU

[Blueruth in reply to coolkitty1934]

I see it now! I like how you handled the pupil. How could you make feel big?

[coolkitty1934 in reply to Blueruth]

what do you mean make it big?

[Hidden]

sorry to sound formal...its not rejection..its to be succint...i been teadher too long and tendency to be long winded.

first drawing is like saying cooking..........drawing free hand or out of imagination is higly creative and the underlying purpose is expression and projection...an non verbal inner language dating back to the cave people. There is attempting to draw objedcts and fantasy drawings,,,,doodling helps loosen people up to the far range or accurate drawing...whidh is a style not the ...style........This later area is reproduction of often reference photos or objects or or portraits. this is aided by turning the photo upside down forcing the artrist to concentrareand increases accuracy.

Expressive drawing can be therapuetic....its ur drawing and no right or wrong...same with cartoons which are fun and or may have messages......Sometimes drawings are practie to develop shading and accuracy........ultiamtely it depends on what u want and ur purpose (s) ....

pemost artist s say.....ten thousand drawings and practicepracrtice pratice......hope this helps......

also helps to set teh drawint asside.....see what works for u and what doesnt.....perfedtrly rine to erase or modirfy .......its not surgery.....its develoopnt a skill......

[coolkitty1934 in reply to Hidden]

wow anyway i get the idea its my drawing so there is no right or wrong UwU

[Hidden in reply to coolkitty1934]

UUUUUU GGGGOOOOOTTTT IT- Luna and others- say same thing- (i dont mind credit- i like to share the stage as thats only right....Luna is totaly into varous forms of art.....just likke there is no correct book......huh? point is this is our area of freedom .....

second like playing instrumetn or anything......try not to make self conclusion on one time....practice thousands of time....when i started 30 years ago.....my dog would hide.....some kind peopel said....keep trying .....(they could have laughted) which luna and dolphin and many artists where....never would or

but its not a rembrandt ....!

( a bad attitude to have towards students)

LC and others been very supportive......no fun alone.....the people here ...are the reason u keep trying

not adriene...no rocky principle

[Hidden]

(see LC doesnt understand i learn from her......lots and lots to learn....thankfully .....but sooooooooo helpful to have a club not.....without her and others.....whats the p;oint? we collaborate like baseball team..........now *** its fun ....regardless of what style anyone does or what leave......who cares....its a personal journey)

[Hidden]

the hardest steps.......dare to step across the line..........from observer ....to being a player (football model or theatre model ish)

LC and others totally get that.......takes an army to defeat social injustice and ignorance

[Hidden]

😪😪😪😪😪😪😪 really like it when u and others lead and win...hard to expalin.....really dont....like dominating or center of attention.....like it when we alll win

[Hidden in reply to Hidden]

wish we could have a huge art club and allllllllll show and tell anyyyy project

like it when

everrry one wins.....(but thank u- cant exp;lain)

[Hidden]

(((( i know that intuitively or whatever....get a sense- u do it to get the ball rolling ...but thats altruism....and yes.....we love it when u .........and others take the lead and everyone particip;aes.....dont know why but....love it when u and allget rolling and p;ep;lel thoughts....cant explain thks)

[Hidden]

Takes an army to dfeat injustice........im not an leader here-just a big mouth ) like it when everyone particiapates .....very thankful for lc and others..