Parkinson's Movement
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Some times

2212013 4am

Sometimes

When I cannot move I think of you and smile

Your wondrous grace, effortless in all things

Shines out onto my world

Your honest love of all that life brings us

Gives me hope and joy

How can I be you, too?

Sometimes when I cannot sleep, I meditate or medicate

Sometimes when I cannot type I think of you and dream

Of an idyllic time, not long past, when we were royalty

Pharaoh-like we floated downstream

Carefree as Schrodinger’s Cat

Am I you or are you my creation?

How can I become you, too?

Sometimes when I cannot see

I imagine…you

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This is beautiful. I wish I had someone to share a pillow with and walk at leisure in the fields as my feet take me. The journey is ofttimes a lonely path to come out of the mist.....Tony

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Your words are so lovely, pure and true!

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I can not walk, as a result of an injury, from a fall and I am now in a wheelchair. But I take a walk with my Lord everyday! If you can't do that chose someone real or someone passed on with you! Beautiful words. Thank you!

Blessings,

Carol. <><

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good job, poet, thank you!

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Beautiful.

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Lovely!

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You guys are so very kind! Thank you for your encouraging words. You are my extended family, what I say I say for you...Thank you my friends!

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Your "special relationship" exemplifiys itself in the

"warmth" of your words....you are "truely blessed. "

Thank you for sharing......"Beautifly expressed."

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wow! thanks!

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HOW BEAUTIFUL ARE YOUR WORDS SO CLEAN AND CLEAR THEY HAVE THE SOUND OF TINKLELING BELLS COMING FROM ACROSS A BEAUTIFUL MOUNTIN LAKE KEEP ON WRITING ,MY FRIEND, AND DREAMING!!! GOD S BLESSINGS BE WITH YOU Ellie

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hi parkie poet

yes a great poem

lol JIll

:-)

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A TRULY MOVING PIECE

THANK YOU SO MUCH

SHASHA XXX

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