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Some Poems for SOSPlease and everyone else

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These poems were written about 8 years ago one week apart

THERE ARE TIMES A

There are times when life is hard

And I feel a failure

and now is one of those times

There are times when I miss my father

and I feel alone

And now is one of those times

There are times when all is black

and I don't want to go on

And now is one of those times

Black cat in a coal shed at night

Drowning in an ocean of despair

And now is one of those times

THERE ARE TIMES B

There are times when life is hard

and it doesn't matter

And now is one of those times

There are times when I sense my father near

and I am not alone

And now is one of those times

There are times when all is black

and I turn the light on

And now is one of those times

Black cat in a coal shed at night

dreaming of dinner

And now is one of those times

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ThemysciraDrive

Love those - the way a few simple word changes the whole picture, exactly the way it is in reality.

Like the way you have a talent for conveying complexity and emotions with such economy of words. I always end up getting flowery.

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Gambit62 in reply to ThemysciraDrive

At the time it's usually because a few words is all I can actually manage - just haven't got the energy for anything else :)

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SOSPLEASE

Thanks, that makes me smile

Lovely poems, well done and thanks for sharing them. Suexx

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