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Ode to Steve -

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Just for You

Just hours before you left me

I watched you as you slept

Held your hand and whispered

then out of the door I crept

I did not want to wake you,

but how I wish I had

To let you know I loved you

And not to feel so sad

I would see you tomorrow,

But tomorrow never came

You decided that I

had seen enough of your pain

A blessing for you, my darling,

the salvation for your strife

An ending never chosen

for the true love of my life

We shall all shed tears

for the loss of a man so kind

But the joyous memories

will all of us remind

Of our boys as they grew

into the men we are so proud

Your legacy, my love,

will always be around

Of how we lived and laughed

with our family and friends so true

This is not the end, my dear,

one day I will be back with you

Until that time comes

look down on us and see

You will never be forgotten

- you will always be with me.

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sassy59

So beautifully put Bossidan. In time your wonderful memories of Steve will push away the pain.

Take care of yourself dear lady. Xxxx

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Magpuss

That's a lovely tribute to your dear husband and to the life that you've shared, I hope that writing it has helped to ease your pain a little. Please take care of yourself xx

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powderpuff

So beautifully composed & reads just right! Take good care.

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Damon1864Volunteer

How beautiful those words are, all those wonderful memories hope they have helped with the pain. Take good care of yourself and your family love 🤗 Bernadette

Xxx

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skischool

Very moving and beautiful words Bossidan and like others i hope penning them eases your pain and suffering and comforts you.

Ski's x

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Eddie1973

So beautiful, my thoughts are with you x

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pepapod

That is a lovely tribute to your beloved. I hope you will feel all the support you need at this time.

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Patsy164

Such beautiful words to a man that will be sorely missed. So sorry for your loss as I said before. Xx

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JANET127

Right from the Heart! Beautiful! Janet127

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Kittykat2

That's very moving and beautiful so full of love .

Take care 💕X

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Emmles70

Such a beautiful poem. I'm so sorry for your loss 😪💜

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Lynneypin

❤️

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Hacienda

Made me weep, My Dear, Steve is in your Heart forever, You will always feel him next to you. I Talk to my Loved one's who have Passed, It Eases the pain. I feel them. Much Love to you & Your family at this very sad Time. Love n gentle Hugs. C.XXXX

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Izb1

Words so beautifully written, so sorry for your loss x

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Whitechinchilla

So sorry for your loss.

Your words are very moving indeed.

May your god be with you and bring you peace.

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Ergendl

So touching.

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Lyd12

Beautiful, heartfelt and sad. The price we pay for loving relationships. Love Iris x

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watergazer

That's beautiful, from the heart. Hope it helps you in your grieving. Keep your wonderful memories in your heart. Take care. Sending you hugs. x Anita

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Corin1950

What a beautiful tribute you have written from your heart .

Steve will always be with you in your memories of your life together and in your boys and in their families too.

Wishing you all the best

Corin

X

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Shirleyj

Beautiful and so touching 💖 x x

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welshtony

Lovely words, and a great tribute

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Happydogs4France

So emotive, and as my hubby has only recently been diagnosed with PF, it resonates with me, and I'm sure mzny others.

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SquirrelsHolt

Extremely poignant ... Wonderfully written and as others have already said, a fitting tribute indeed.

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mbscbpmbscbp

That verse is so compassionate it brought tears to my eyes It is a beautiful contribution to your soul mate.Just look at it this way .You have been so lucky to meet your partner and enjoy each others company for so long.At least you have some wonderful memories to look back on.It will be hard living without him but he will still be there looking down on you You were made for each other and he loved you till his dying breath I wish you and your family all the best

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Nicholatracy

Quite beautiful. So sorry 🐞

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Jaybird19

"Tomorrow never came" memories long gone but not forgotten .

Thank you for those words.

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Dedalus

Beautiful words x

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Sandyeggo

My condolences, my heart is breaking for you. I’m thinking your boys are very afraid at this time please take care of yourself for them as well as yourself. Carry on strong woman

Thank you all for your kind comments.

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